How much do you like this song I wrote and what do you think of it?

A guy starts walking down the street looking for someone to meet. When I see him standing there I just stare. So, he walks up to me and says "Hey, babe want to go on a date?" and I said "Sorry, it's too late." and he asked me why. I just couldn't tell him the truth nor a lie. So, I just said goodbye.

K K2008-02-05T13:02:51Z

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yer its sounds gd really mkes me think bout previous experiences, you got quite a talent but sorry if the song is true but yer u go for it

SHORTIE242008-02-05T13:00:03Z

Sounds like your telling a story a very good 1 tho you should carry on wit it id love to read the rest

The Human Rubiks Cube2008-02-05T12:57:10Z

More like a poem. But clever nonetheless.

Anonymous2008-02-05T12:57:46Z

it's pretty goodd =]

not to hurt your feelings. but it's not the BEST i've heard.
but WAYYYYYYY better than hannah montana =D