Rate/Fix My zombie deck?

Zombie Smackdown

Monsters:18

Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower: 1
Ryu Kokki: 2
Spirit Reaper: 1
Regenerating Mummy:1 (i want to remove this...)
Return Zombie: 1
Sangan: 1
Pyramid Turtle: 2 (i intend to buy another)
Despair From The Dark: 2
Vampire Genesis: 1 (is this thing even worth it?)
Vampire Lord: 3 (duh)
Dark Dust Spirit: 1 (this thing worth it?)
Marshmallon: 1 (duh i like it for defense)
Double Coston: 1 (lame i think...remove maybe?)

Spells:21

Card Of Safe Return: 1
Creature Swap: 2
Fairy Meteor Crush: 1 (random i know i dont really need it)
Emergency Provisions: 1
Mystic Space Typhoon: 1
Pot Of Greed: 1
Swords Of Revealing Light: 1
Heavy Storm: 1
Giant Trunade: 1
Snatch Steal: 1
Nobleman Of Crossout: 1
Lightning Vortex: 2
Book Of Life: 2 (buying another i think)
Call Of The Mummy: 3
Reload: 2

Trap:9

Torrential Tribute:1
Magic Cylinder: 1
Reckless Greed: 1
Magic Jammer: 1
Dust Tornado: 1
Ultimate Offering: 1
Sakuretsu Armor: 3

I don't know how this deck is compared to most zombie decks but hey it works for school. However i want to hit a tournment or 2 so i want to streamline it and vamp it up. Thanks

2008-02-18T16:44:36Z

I made the new list with the suggestions
here it is:
Zombie Smackdown Revised

Monsters:18

Soul-Absorbing Bone Tower: 1
Ryu Kokki: 2
Spirit Reaper: 1
Sangan: 1
Pyramid Turtle: 3
Despair From The Dark: 2
Vampire Lord: 3 (duh)
Marshmallon: 1
Vampires Curse: 2
Il Bud: 2 (how the heck am i supposed to get these??? im not rich...)
Zombie Master: 3 (See above)

Spells:21

Card Of Safe Return: 3
Creature Swap: 2
Mystic Space Typhoon: 1
Pot Of Greed: 1
Swords Of Revealing Light: 1
Heavy Storm: 1
Giant Trunade: 1
Nobleman Of Crossout: 1
Lightning Vortex: 2
Book Of Life: 2 (buying another i think)
Call Of The Mummy: 3

Trap:9

Torrential Tribute:1
Magic Cylinder: 1
Magic Jammer: 1
Dust Tornado: 1
Sakuretsu Armor: 3

Theres all the revisions Tyler R suggested I dont know if i can get all the cards but heck ill try.

P.S. Dont comment if you are on here to bash the game if you dont like it then dont play it or for that matter have anything 2 do with it

Anonymous2008-02-17T19:55:20Z

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k here are changes that you MUST do

-vampire genesis
+2 vampires curse (ptdn)
-ultimate offering
-reckless greed
-fairy meteor crush
-double coston
-dark dust spirit
-return zombie
-regenerating mummy
+pyramid turtle
+3 zombie master
+2 ll bud
-2 reload
-snatch steal (its illegal)
+2 card of safe return
-Emergency Provisions

anyway more changes need to be made but list it again with these changes and i'll improve it even more