Yugioh Experts Plz Rate/Fix My Dark World Deck?

I need strong advice on what to do with my Dark World deck to make it more stable and give me control. I really need help here. Should i add him>>>
http://yugioh.wikia.com/wiki/Doomcaliber_Knight

Ok i don't have a Solemn Judgement yet but i am looking for one.

Monsters 19

1x Dark Armed Dragon
1x Gorz the Emissary of Darkness
1x Cyber Dragon
2x Dark Necrofear
3x Goldd D.W.
2x Sillva D.W.
1x Morphing Jar
1x Sangan
1x Night Assailant
1x Spirit Reaper
1x Mystic Tomato
1x Phantom of Chaos
2x Psychic Commander
1x Krebons (need a Plaguespreader Zombie)

Spells 14

1x Card Destruction
2x Allure of Darkness
3x Dark World Dealings
2x Dark World Lightning
1x Book of Moon
1x Emergency Teleport
1x Heavy Storm
1x Monster Reborn
1x Mystical Space Typhoon
1x Giant Trunade

Traps 7

1x Torrential Tribute
1x Mirror Force (lol i finally got one today !!!!!!!!!!!!!!)
1x Crush Card Virus
3x Dark Deal
1x Bottomless Trap Hole

Extra deck - i don't have DSF, Goyo, or Arcanite Magicain.

1x Stardust Dragon
2x Red Dragon Archfiend
1x Goyo Guardian
1x Colossal Fighter
1x Magic Android
1x Thought Ruler Archfiend
1x Iron Chain Dragon
1x X-Saber Urbellum
1x Psychic lifetrancer

Side deck (so far) 10

2x Skill Drain
1x Phantom of Chaos
2x Light Imprisoning Mirror
3x Mirror of Oaths
1x Reign-Beux D.W. (just incase)
1x Breaker the Magician Warrior

Rate on a scale of 1-10, 10 being the best.

any suggestion will be nice.

2009-08-08T13:27:21Z

add a Deck Devastation Virus in the side

Hsin Tung2009-08-08T14:05:52Z

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I rate is 6/10 for now. first of all, u need more DARK WORLD monsters! for the line-up, u dont need:
1x Mystic Tomato
1x Phantom of Chaos
2x Psychic Commander
1x Krebons
1x Spirit Reaper

2x Dark World Lightning
1x Book of Moon
1x Emergency Teleport

1x Dark Deal

and here's what u need instead:

2x Broww, Huntsman of Dark World
1x Scarr, Scout of Dark World
1x Beiige, Vanguard of Dark World
1x Kahkki, Guerilla of Dark World
1x Silva of DW

1x Card of Safe Return
1x Hand Destruction
2x Creature Swap

1x Bottomless Trap Hole

that should help the control and efficiency of ur deck by a lot. now i rate this deck 8.5/10

hope this helps! :)

?2009-08-08T14:47:04Z

I will give u a 6/10 but you are missing the dark world part + gorz isnt that good in a dark world deck and u can probably add a marshmallon instead of the spirit reaper.

Patrick922009-08-09T12:18:15Z

Not a bad deck 9/10

?2016-04-03T10:20:09Z

Ok magical Stone excavation for you spell cards, Discard 2 cards. Add 1 Spell Card from your Graveyard to your hand. There is no Discard varriation for Traps yet. Possibly mask of darkness

Trever Rainbow Darke2009-08-08T16:12:51Z

where are the Dark World monsters???

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