What do you think of this so far?? :)?

There hasn't been much editing done to it..so it's pretty much a first or second draft. What do you think so far? :)

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID=23604

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2011-11-06T14:10:13Z

@ Lonnie..it may only be a first draft, but I'm not a five year old. Its perfectly easy to read and understand. So there's not much effort that has to be put into reading it, really. maybe if you'd have read it you might have realized that.

2011-11-06T14:10:14Z

@ Lonnie..it may only be a first draft, but I'm not a five year old. Its perfectly easy to read and understand. So there's not much effort that has to be put into reading it, really. maybe if you'd have read it you might have realized that.

?2011-11-06T05:35:23Z

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I'm not trying to should harsh here, but I don't know cause I don't read it. It might be good, or it might be bad, but I would be embarrassed if someone was reading my first draft as a writer. I do know, however; that if you are asking people to read your work and comment on it, then you should at least have the decency to edit it into something they won't have to struggle to read. You know? If you want our effort towards you work, I think you should be the first one to add yours.

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Cousin Chopstix2011-11-08T02:53:32Z

I think it's awesome! You get a feel for the characters just by the way you describe their actions. And you also give a good picture!

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