Is this charcter idea original or stupid =D?

These are not main characters. I hope it isnt confusing. And also its fantasy type o story ( proba ily +12) but i really need help from everyone!

So since i was a kid ive always loved "little red riding hood" and i thought i could use it somehow so heres my idea:
Girl -> Raven ( not sure about the name..) - dark hair - white skin - yellow eyes - she is very shy yet dangerous. Very. XD ( based on the wolf )
Boy -> Jasper - blond hair - green eyes - very strong and serious yet silly ( based on red riding hood ; please dont think of him like a shy or weak person, imagine the red riding hood boy version. The hot version. ( xD )

Its just an idea. Im just asking if i should use it or is it stupid. What do you think. If any questions i will answer right away!! Thank you for reading!

2012-01-13T16:43:40Z

Oh thank you

?2012-01-13T16:36:38Z

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I think that it's really creative! Go for it! :)

Elizabeth H2012-01-13T16:37:59Z

I don't think that is a stupid idea at all! The only thing is I would change the boy name, I don't know what but it doesn't feel like a great fit. Work on the boy charater, get to know him a little more, you seem to know more about Raven.

Good Luck fellow writer!

?2012-01-13T16:38:51Z

The girl's name is overused.
The boy's name is overused.