Would anyone here be willing to read my original story?

So I've got this little story of mine. I'm writing the continuation right now, but I'm discouraged, because it's been about a month since I put it on FictionPress, and only 9 people (including myself) have read it. I would love a review of the story, so if you will...
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/3001038/1/bDoctor_b_bSpecter_b_Not_Entirely_Unlike_Death

Jacob2012-03-28T21:59:09Z

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Nice story. It's very good.