What do you think of this writing? I wrote it when I was 8th grade?

https://sites.google.com/site/slurexe97slegacyoftheouroboros/home/projects/other-writings/tales-of-transylvania-x
It's pretty short, only 2494 words (counted by Word) in 7 short chapters, one chapter is just about a page long. Please tell me whether this good, I just found this in my old files (and decided to upload it). It was for a project and I kinda did it in a hurry. I think it's rather cliche myself.

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Cliche.. perhaps. But the way I see it, there are two types of cliche. Cliche-good and cliche-bad. I read chapter 1 of your story, and already was curious as to what it was about. I think it's really good, therefore falling under the category of cliche-good. I might end up reading the whole thing ;)