Something I drew, please give feedback and criticism?

http://fav.me/d6fl4eb
Pencil and pen on paper, photographed.

It's a coloured version of: http://fav.me/d6fi72v

Thanks.

2013-07-28T13:54:01Z

If you can, please answer this too: http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index;_ylt=AhZoQAQgghMq2Pm2g.H18r3sy6IX;_ylv=3?qid=20130727224827AAXf8ml
Thanks again.

2013-07-28T13:54:57Z

Dan: This is not Sailor moon nor an anime. It's Castlevania. You didn't even read the title of the picture.

2013-07-28T19:00:38Z

This is basically my style of drawing, using single bold lines to mark off borders. It looks like manga? I've never learnt how to draw manga at all. I learn how to draw by myself.

Anonymous2013-07-28T18:46:06Z

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I think he meant (but maybe not, but this is what I think anyway) that you should apply yourself not to learning a manga style (as this seems influenced by it (reference at least) and learn to simply draw first. Style comes later. Then again, if you don't want to imitate, then there's really no reason for fan art. Nevermind, scrap that.

Anonymous2013-07-28T20:53:47Z

Very well done. But that anime sailer moon stuff is lame. Use your talents elsewhere maybe?