Do you have any specific recommendations or criticisms for these pieces I composed?

The first piece I expect to get much criticism, since it is a waltz that is quite boring. The second piece is an etude that has similar variations to Chopin's etude in f major, and I also expect to get some criticism.

http://www.noteflight.com/scores/view/d5cd74dc0d78cc9d53033d733f6c48b9697c2c26

Thank you.

?2013-09-24T06:48:36Z

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I could only see one piece, which was totally unplayable in every sense of the word. There's nothing you can do to improve that, I would honestly scrap it. Sorry to be so frank...