Can you give me feedback on my post about depression please?

Hi guys,
I have written a post on depression.can you please validate my views and give me feedback?Your valuable opinion is greatly appreciated :)
http://listlessfantasies.blogspot.in/2014/02/depression-on-why-some-fancy-death.html

canada_winnipeg_man2014-03-11T15:43:06Z

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There is no one thing that causes depression in children, according to the NMHA's Children's Mental Health Matters campaign. A family history of depression, life stresses such as losing a parent, divorce, or discrimination, and other physical or psychological problems can all contribute to the illness. Children who have been abused, neglected, have experienced other traumas, or suffer from chronic illness are also at a higher risk for depression.

Depression in children often occurs along with other mental health problems such as anxiety and bipolar or disruptive behavior disorders.
A post about depression is very nice idea.Go on and help them..........