Is this bio okay for a dating site?
"I see you're wearing make-up. Is that cuz you think you're ugly? Cuz you're not. You could be going au naturale if you wanted to
Calm and gentle guy with a nice voice
I like starting off as friends and then moving forward naturally
Just moved to *redacted*, would love to have someone show me around"
My friend told me she thought the first part was a little corny but not too bad, other than that nothing wrong but I want other opinions. Trying to figure out if it's my bio or my face that's causing me to get no likes. I thought my bio hits all the major points, tries to be light and humorous, gives some details about myself without being long winded, states my intentions, and gives relevant info to talk about. What do you think?