Please correct my English?

I'm studying English. If there are any errors in the sentences I made below, please let me know. Thank you in advance.


  "However, learning a language can be compared to learning how to ride a bike. You may need to take a hard time while you are practicing, but there will be nothing hard after you become able to ride a bike. You only need to keep riding it."

Anonymous2021-02-26T13:59:23Z

You may HAVE a hard time while you are LEARNING, but there will be nothing hard ABOUT IT after you HAVE LEARNED.  You JUST HAVE TO KEEP riding it.

choko_canyon2021-02-26T09:33:45Z

Hi carlo, here's a corrected version that sounds more natural: "However, learning a language can be compared to learning how to ride a bike: It may be difficult  while you are practicing, but it won't be difficult after you learn how. You just need to keep practicing".