Can someone help me with my poem???

I suggest you start by choosing which type of revolution you want to write a poem about. Revolution can mean a lot of different things, e.g. political upheaval, industrial change, innovation - pick one you find interesting and go with that.

As for rhyming, the choice is yours - some people find it helps them to rhyme as it restricts their options in writing the next line, which stops them from feeling overwhelmed by the openness a non-rhyming poem can present.

Concentrate on writing a couple of opening lines and then go with the flow from there. Good luck.

For me a poem has to have rhythm. It does not always ought to rhyme nevertheless it demands to hit my feelings. I believe readability of expression is principal as good. I do not love to moment wager what I'm studying approximately. I constantly appear for what I time period "poetic gem stones"within the textual content.