if you have time read this song i wrote.?

im not finished but tell me if its any good its kinda deep, well to me

3 major deaths

(Verse one)

Dear lord why did you take my nana when I was thirteen

The only way I can see her is thru pictures and my dreams

That night she died I can remember everything

I was crying with my family

Whishing I was dead instead of her

Cuz I didn’t want to feel the pain that accrued

I knew I shouldn’t be crying cuz she has her wings now flying like a bird

She died a happy death don’t understand me

Let me explain it in my own words

She was very religious

Believed god and everything that comes with it

You might not believe it but when she passed she had a smile on her face

To me that’s how she let us know she made it pass those pearly gates

She died by Alzheimer’s at the age of 71

If you ask me that’s still young

I miss you nana ill see when my day comes

(chorus)

My nana was my 1st major death in my life

I asked god why he couldn’t give her more time

And why did he make me say a final goodbye

Now my nana only lives thru my heart and mind

(verse two)

Me and my family at St. Marys hospital surrounding my tio’s bed

He’s been here for awhile he had a stroke my tia said

I remember my family in the room hearing his last breath

And we are start crying well he’s laying there dead

My tia’s crying and yelling “you promised me you‘ll never leave me!”

My second close death and it wasn’t less easy

Nothing left to do but remember the memories

One thing I remember is

he use to do math in his head fast like crazy

I said to myself imma be like that so im gonna practice daily

I miss you tio ill see you when god takes my life away from me

(Chorus)

My tio was my 2nd major death in my life

I asked god again why he couldn’t give him more time

And why did he make me say another final goodbye

Now my tio lives only thru my heart and mind