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It is a few weeks before Christmas Break more precisely Saturday, December 6th. Everyone knows Easton Academy’s annual Winter Ball is the 6th. That night Ariana makes a bet with Thomas that her current boyfriend- Josh is still a virgin. The winner takes all. Josh has always told Ariana that he was a virgin and was waiting for the right girl, which he believes to be Ariana.

The next couple days during school she discovers some secrets that could ruin some people’s lives. Such as Mr. Patterson is having an affair with a fellow Billings girl named Isabel Coates. Also she finds out Kati Farkas, Isabel’s best friend- is paying 2 of her teacher’s to give her good grades. But being the good girl Ariana is she decides to keep it a secret, at least for now.

Then one night Ariana sneaks around with Thomas because she likes him and he likes her. They kiss and get close to doing it but she says she couldn’t hurt Josh like that. So she makes him stop. The next couple days everything is normal but she is starting to feel like Thomas is the one she wants not Josh.

One night Thomas invites Ariana to the old Chapel hidden in the woods. They again get close to doing it but she makes him stop, due to the pure feeling of guilt. But little did they know, Isabel and Kati got some exclusive footage of them kissing and tries to blackmail Ariana. But Ariana threatens to blackmail them too. Because she has footage of Isabel hooking up with Mr. Patterson and she has voice recordings of Kati paying her teachers to give her A’s.

But Thomas isn’t about to give up on the bet they made. So they look in Josh’s dorm room one day when Josh is on a weekend vacation. They see a chart of all the girls Josh had slept with. He kept under a document labeled “Scores”. Thomas says that he feels sorry for Ariana. But Ariana says that she isn’t a sore loser and then they do it in Josh’s bed. But the next day Thomas gets expelled because he is seen sneaking over to Billings from Kings Hall. Ariana thinks it is all her fault because she invited him over.

But at Ariana and Kate’s Winter Masque Ball Thomas appears there and says he is back at Easton. Ariana is so happy. She then breaks up with Josh and gets together with Thomas. In the end Thomas and Ariana are together and Kate is still with her long time boyfriend Josh. But Ariana told Isabel that she broke up with Josh and Isabel deleted the film. But, Ariana still has the footage and keeps it for future reference.