where can i post my book online to get honest criticism?

i do not like posting things online just because i am kind of paranoid that way... so i would suggest giving your writing to some of your peers to read and make sure they understand that you can take and actually want criticism.

and i would be happy to critique your writing if you will email it to me.

this is extraordinarily reliable, in spite of the fact that in case you have have been given some artwork to do on it. case in point, i could evaluate changing deathly interior the 1st sentence to deadly. It sounds greater advantageous. additionally, "deathly droplets of rain" sounds somewhat overdone. deadly raindrops, possibly? i don't understand. only one thing to contemplate. A comma would not belong placing apart the two suggestions interior the 2nd sentence. attempt employing an em sprint, semicolon or era. placed an and before "i can infrequently breathe" interior the third sentence. i believe plane applications as a plural besides as a unique, in spite of the fact that if i could desire to be flawed approximately that. different than those issues, nonetheless, this is extraordinarily darn reliable, i think of. It actually attracts the reader in, makes them prefer to maintain analyzing. desire this helps!

Quite frankly, don't post your stuff online.

you can't really trust anyone with your material .

but what you can try is getting a query letter and synopsis put together.

and send it off to some well- known agents. they wont steal your ideas because it would risk their reputation. anyway, agents will give you a true opinion of your writing.

and who knows, you might even get published and make something out of it!

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