Demise/Zorc/Blue-Eyes Deck?

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To Jake, i'm wondering how u are gonna summon demise king with no ritual spell? And u took out ARA. nice.

Monsters:16

3 Demise, King of Armageddon

3 Manju of the Ten-Thousand Hands

2 Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon

2 Dark master-Zorc

2 Tri-Horned Dragon

1 Gorz, Emissary of Darkness

1 Sangan

1 Phantom Skyblaster

1 Phantom of Chaos

Spells: 20

3 Allure of Darkness

3 Geartown

3 Trade-In

1 Advanced Ritual Art

1 Brain Control

1 End of the World

1 Giant Trunade

1 Heavy Storm

1 Limiter Removal

2 Contract with the Abyss

1 Mystical Space Typhoon

1 Monster Reborn

1 Terraforming

Traps: 6

3 Reckless Greed

3 Threatening Roar

At least you semi-know what you are doing, this deck is okay, but the 'tech' cards you included aren't going to help much at all. Based on how this deck is structured, you'll will almost always end up with a dead card in your hand where you'll have no way of using it. Simply put, the ratios on what you might be able to do in your first turn is relatively small.

Here are my gripes for this deck:

1. This deck only has 6 Level-4 or less Monsters, that's a no-no.

2. You have 10 Level-5+ Monsters, that's WAY too high.

3. Your Spells and Traps are hits and misses in terms of what they are.

Here are the fixes you should make to this deck:

1. Take out Dark Necrofear

2. Take out 2 Blue-Eyes White Dragon

3. Take out 1 Dark Master - Zorc

4. Add in 1 Sonic Bird

5. Add in 2 Senju of the Thousand Hands

6. Add in 1 Psychic Commander

7. Add in 2 Krebons

8. Add in 2 Goyo Guardian

9. Add in 1 Black Rose Dragon

1. Take out 1 Geartown

2. Take out 2 Trade-In

3. Take out Advanced Ritual Art

4. Take out Burst Stream of Destruction

5. Take out Swing of Memories

6. Take out Limiter Removal

7. Take out Megamorph

8. Add in 1 Contract with the Abyss

9. Add in 3 Emergency Teleport

10. Add in 1 Mystical Space Typhoon

11. Add in 1 My Body as a Shield

12. Add in 1 United We Stand

1. Take out Ceasefire

2. Take out 3 Reckless Greed [Against TeleDAD, its suicidal]

3. Add in 1 Torrential Tribute

4. Add in 1 Gravity Bind

5. Add in 1 Mirror Force* OR 2 Sakuretsu Armor**

6. Add in 1 Solemn Judgment OR 1 Bottomless Trap Hole

7. Add in 1 Trap Dustshoot* OR 0 Trap Dustshoot**

After making those adjustments, you now have this Teleport Ritual deck. You can search your deck with Sonic Bird, Manju, and Senju. Then you can Synchro Summon with them using Emergency Teleport and Krebons / Psychic Commander. You can now protect your Ritual Monsters with My Body as a Shield while also protecting the cards used for the Ritual Summon using Gravity Bind. In all, this new deck is a turn for the better. Here's the new TeleRitual deck:

Monsters: 18 Cards

2x Dark Master - Zorc

2x Ancient Gear Gadjiltron Dragon

2x Demise, King of Armageddon

3x Manju of the Ten-Thousand Hands

2x Senju of the Thousand Hands

2x Sonic Bird

1x Dark Grepher

1x Sangan

1x Psychic Commander

2x Krebons

Spells: 16 Cards

2x Geartown

1x Trade-In

3x Contract with the Abyss

1x Brain Control

1x Heavy Storm

1x Card Destruction

1x Monster Reborn

1x My Body as a Shield

3x Emergency Teleport

1x United We Stand

1x Mystical Space Typhoon

Traps: 8 Cards

3x Threatening Roar

1x Torrential Tribute

1x Gravity Bind

1x Mirror Force* OR 2x Sakuretsu Armor**

1x Trap Dustshoot* OR 0x Trap Dustshoot**

1x Solemn Judgment OR 1x Bottomless Trap Hole

Extra Deck: 3 Cards

1x Black Rose Dragon

2x Goyo Guardian

that is way too plenty paintings to get a Blues Eyes proper Dragon out. additionally with immediately's card it does no longer final very long. i think of the pink-Eyes is extra perfect by using fact there's a card call Inferno hearth Blast that if it is going against a Blue Eyes that 3000 harm on your fighters existence factors. additionally pink Eyes would properly be unquestionably summoned with pink Eyes B. Chick and then summoned out the graveyard with pink Eyes Wyvern. yet another element there is pink Eyes Darkness steel Dragon that would properly be particular summoned by way of removing a dragon monster on the sphere and can particular summon a dragon out the graveyard or hand. And one final element pink Eyes Darkness Dragon has an result which it may earnings 3 hundred attack factors for each dragon in the graveyard which could unquestionably surpass a Blue Eyes.