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I am posting this a second time ONLY becsue the first time I couldnt put much in the details box so this time I posted it on a web site... I would appriciate any comments and any ratings u wish to leave on the site itself.

Synaps of the story

Sir Felix, Lady Judzia and Squire Dax face trials and tribulations. As they go on their nightly patrols. Over the course of a weeks time the three uncover a deadly mystery and a horrible monster. We tag along hearing the tale told through the eyes of Squire Dax. Most pets like their owners are more concerned with there small live than the happiness of other. Felix and his friends connect to them and others in intricate and enduring ways.

Throughout the week we follow as they find clues to the deadly mystery of what is killing pets in their area. Discovering clues as well as remains of loved ones along the way. We meet new characters and solve a few minor quests along the way. The entire story leads to an end confrontation with the evil creature that is causing all the problems. The confrontation ends with a narrow victory and a sort of melancholic fear. Happy to have the evil stopped but saddened it had to end with another death.

The Story is at the link below.

http://www.worthyofpublishing.com/book.asp?book_ID...