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do you guys think this is pretty?
i wrote it to be apart of a book im writing over the holidays... im 13.
"with the entry lighten and wreathed, golden showered with magic, she could not wish for more than at this perfect moment, a dark someone would scarcely care to enjoy it with her"
to your comments-
"lighten and wreathed"
really? you cant interpret that? think about it...
and "to scarcely enjoy it with her"
means the girl is so desperate to be with this person she would settle for the smallest bit of affection back.
(WORK ON INTERPRATION)
sorry... i had to interpret beowulf and it's wayy harder than what i have written)
6 Answers
- 1 decade ago
Sorry to be a critic. I have a big thing for English. Your grammar isn't very good... "lighten and wreathed" made no sense... and "scarcely care" makes it sound like this character wants someone to NOT enjoy spending time with her.
- 1 decade ago
You may want to reconsider the phrase “golden showered”.
Look it up.
