Writing an essay based on the Hamlet play and this statement: domino effect of death?

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"domino effect of death" is a phrase, not a statement. You need to make a complete statement of what you intend to support in the remainder of the paper.

Generally, that sentence appears as either the first or last of your intro paragraph.