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How do I write a decent love scene? Advice needed?

I want it to be sweet, and caring, but sensual. And the girl is nervous, but her husband warms her up.

Any advice?

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  • 1 decade ago
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    Stay away from clichéd phrases and flowery euphemisms for body parts. Ground it in details of how it feels, smells, sounds & what it means emotionally from the nervous girl's point of view. And maybe drink a glass of wine while you're writing it to loosen you up -- if it turns you on it should work for other people reading your story.

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    1 decade ago

    Write from yourself and your experiences. Use your knowledge of how it feels to have a warm hand touch your cheek, or soft lips slowly close down on yours. You have to really be imaginative.

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