i need help with a wording a spell can any one help?

It is wonderful that you are attempting to write your own spell work but it's not about spending lots of time writing out spells. You need to first silence your mind and see if any of it comes to you naturally.

It doesn't even have to rhyme and as a matter of fact before I was able to make them rhyme all my spells were not even close to rhyming.

Writing spells is supposed to be a natural dance that comes from the heart. Forcing out something that rhymes and then asking others to help you finish writing it is a big no no. The point to writing them yourself is to allow your body and words to express itself in this ritual, it is all about you and not anyone else.

What is in your heart and in your mind is more important than the best poems out there.

Now about this spell... it's wrong a few places. First of all what is it that you need here? Money or a change of luck? or a change of luck in finances? What I recommend is for you to first do a cleansing. This can be with herbs, smoke, bath or any means you feel is appropriate and then you do a money spell.

The first two lines I cannot even begin to help I just want to toss them out and create just one line out of it. No more wants no more needs bring me million from high and lows... you don't care how this money comes to you and you might end up regreting it later. True story: someone I know was desperately after a spell for money to replace a car because the one she had wasn't working, even after being told to be patient she insisted on a something being done so she got her wish. Later that day her son who was driving her car at the time got into a terrible car accident and broke his wrist and something else (I cannot recall) and she got enough money to get a new car. Is it worth risking the lives of you and those around you?

I am not saying that bad will come of this but you are really not safe guarding yourself at all. I do not feel it appropriate to include "and ye harm none" after any spell unless you are unsure of it but in your case you might want to use it if your spells are asking for money to be sent to you and you care not from where it comes.

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The above spell is one written by me. Pretty simple with ingredients you can find in your grocery stores. Then again grocery stores here where I live has candles and incense which isn't the case for many other places but im sure it's still easy.

In the spirit of Wicca this spell does come with a safe guard at the end (with harm to none). Although wicca is not a strong force in my life it still finds its way into my work from time to time :D

Blessings and I hope anything I have said is of some use to you.

Shadow Storm

Change my fortune for the best

I clear my path for me to rest

No more wants and no more needs

I ask you to hear my pleads

Bring me millions from high and low

From where it comes only I will know

I weave this spell, as above so below

I release it now, let it eb, let it flow!

wow, not a bit greedy now are we? Millions? really?

and a tip for any kind of spell work you do, you always end it with "and it harm none". what if you had a family member die after you did your little spell? for money spells you word it so you are grateful for what you get. believe me you are not going to get millions.

Dude, leave this stuff alone please. I know i can't control what you do but just... stop.