HELP!! Please fix and rate my Yu-Gi-Oh Dark Deck!!? (10 Points to most helpful answer!!)?

you can take out a krebons and put in another spirit reaper/ marshmallon because your life will still be cut by 800, even though you can prevernt an attack... and you have 3 of them...

you need some cards that allows you to gains life, you have too many cards that requires you to pay life points.

you also have too many high level monsters, which can result in bad hand cards

hmm nice deck 8/10 heres some tips i would say take out 1 Breaker and add a Dekoichi Battlenchanted Locomotive to get you more drawing power if you haven't got it go on ebay or Trade it of me lol, and also take out gale and 1 krebons and try to get 2 Dark Grepher which are amazing in this type of deck once again EBAY!! lol it should be quite cheap i bought a couple for £5.97.

i would take out a book of moon and get another bribe and then the deck should be very good indeed.

Take Out Dark Creator Because You Have Dark Armed Dragon and Maybe add a Marshmallon to keep your opponent from attacking you and get a little more defence maybe u can add a morphing jar?

Hope I Helped

could desire to apply slightly of paintings. i could provide it a 5 out of 10 in classic play. it is not criminal for progressed play. basically some somewhat trouble-free suggestion: initiate with a topic/suggestions-set and carry on with it. Any enjoying cards that don't greater healthful that topic or suggestions-set could be replaced with enjoying cards that do. as properly to that, any empty slots (below 40 enjoying cards) could be crammed in with enjoying cards that help the different enjoying cards in the deck. All enjoying cards in the deck could provide you maximum earnings with out having severe expenses for use. wish this helps. stable luck and function exciting.