Short Poem PLEASE Read and leave your opinion?

I can dig it. It reminds me of how life is a collection of deeds, the past affecting the present; and we're always looking for more. Also, it's catchy.

in my opinion, I value comments that are subsidized up via some standards. First may well be info. that's what i look for as quickly as I ask questions right here on Yahoo. What are the info? OR, is it merely an opinion this is ideally placed down in writing. 2nd, i look for reason. Is the opinion out of concern; is it out of Godly principled love? If not then i don't pay lots interest to it. 0.33, is it logical? If it does not ring actual to me, I question its value. Fourth, Does it pass alongside with my Bible experienced ethical sense? this is the actual value. If it stands as much as those 4 factors (and that i'm valuable there are extra yet that's what's coming to concepts), then it quite is an particularly valued opinion. The Zeb ;)

Short and concise. My favorite kind of poetry.

And the title??? =) i think it's quite nice but without a title.

Catchy ._.

Starred.