What do you think of my metrically flawed poem?

Perfectly flawed....

I enjoyed it Elaine, i won't clarify To ignite the abnormal to jot down the unusualar (New notice) All require the wit Of a properly shaped poem regardless of which would be One 2 or possibly even 3 ? good luck. terrific desires. Mars project. (Earth). 14th 365 days Psychology student. 4th 365 days Hypnotism student. 4th 365 days Self Taught music student. 32 Years qualified automobile Technician.

Even faked, bloody, severed heads

in surprises jumping, are a dread

Ghosts and Ghouls do produce

the fears we accept, fearful in our

Halloween beds

Already gone the candy discharged

still the goblins loom large

I love it that would happen to one of my poems without trying .

May our hearts' desires

burn like hot fire

and never be denied

Great ! Thank you :)

I was not looking for flaws Elaine. This flowed nicely for me and I enjoyed the seasonal wish, thank you.

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