Would you please read my poem to my virtual brother, who calls himself Martian Mud?

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MARTIAN MUD
by Elaine

There’s no such thing as ‘Martian Mud,’
the planet’s made of sand and rock,
mud is made with sand and water,
Mars’ ocean is still firmly blocked.

Perhaps the dude means ‘crud,’ not mud,
if so, he should visit ‘Mars Auto Parts,’
there they’ll sell him a huge winch
with which to bring forth his sunken heart.

NASA says that in 50 years
Mars will have a colony,
until then, we’re stuck on Earth
where we must write our poetry.

And speaking of NASA’s colony
only at a distance will we see Mars’ face,
for by then we’ll be in Heaven
or in the other place.

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I am always intrigued by the heroic innocence of folk who consider their time is well-spent explaining things to dumbclucks. (This is even more noticeable an activity on R&S).

You don't get to be dumb by understanding stuff.

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Yes oh well Martian Mud it is just for you Elaine,

To quench the thirst of the violet flame

Like a glass maker blowing bottles into shape

ending up a star a milkshake or even some fame.

Yes in heaven or not I seek fun today

Yet never stop, the beauty of a Poet.

Flying the shuttle off to Mars in 7 months we stop.

Mars Face is a secret I fear

As I've only seen it once myself that was enough.

A beautiful Poem of yours Elaine.

Whom was it about ?

Good Luck.

Best Wishes.

Mars Mission.

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Would you please read my poem to my virtual brother, who calls himself Martian Mud?

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