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New song lyrics I wrote for your perusal?

You'll have to guess how much of this is actually happening.

THE WHOLE TIME

You disappear from view

You hold yourself in

You say you're still lonely to all your friends

It's too hard for you

To be without dreams again

And you wonder if this is how the story ends

Well you know I've always wanted to be your man

And you know I want to help you if I can

If you look real hard, I am sure you'll find

I've been here the whole damn time

Looking for that knight

In armor made of gold

With a flashing smile and gentle loving hands

Still you believe despite

The past that left you cold

And you wonder if this is how the story ends

Then when I come to you, you just turn away

Playing solitary games that I can't play

If you ever have a partner game in mind

I've been here the whole damn time

BRIDGE

I know you're not to blame for everything

But why do you keep taking on and off that ring?

Can you believe in your doubting heart that love is blind

Cause I've been here the whole damn time

I've been here the whole damn time

Yes, I've been here the whole time

Laughing Dolphin Music

19 Oct 2011

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  • 10 years ago
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    I like the lyrics, meaningful and full of love. I will take that with all my heart if be dedicated to me. Thank you.

  • 10 years ago

    I have tried to create song lyrics and can't seem to get anywhere. So, I have admiration for those that can and do. What kind of input would you like to hear? (other than "that's great!) you can e-mail me direct if you want at endroadsal@aol.com

  • 10 years ago

    Wow, I love it. Sounds like either a slow rock or country song.

    Maybe you are the "friend" ... the crying shoulder to a woman who is married but can't make up her mind whether to get divorced or not? Is that what the song is about?

  • 10 years ago

    Great lyrics, now all we need is to hear some music put to them and then we could share with you a great work of music.

    take care

    dave

  • 10 years ago

    Very nice lyrics! Would make a great song!

  • 10 years ago

    I really do like it! It would make a wonderful song, let me know if you pursue it! Would love to hear it someday!!!

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