I touched this lyrics piece up, and it rhymes better. Your thoughts?

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Hopefully, you haven't seen it before so it can surprise you.

Ain’t It Funny

There are people everywhere, needing someone there to care,
Someone just to be there, good or bad.
Your heart says, “This is it!” then your loved one says “I quit”,
Instead of joy and grit, you’re only sad.

Ain’t it funny how we love so very much,
But together we can’t ever find this love?

Well, it ain’t that funny
No, it ain’t that funny
I’m gonna tell ya that it
Ain’t that funny at all

You find the partner for your soul, give the fateful dice a roll,
You put every hope and goal inside the bet.
When it’s all said and done, neither you nor they have won,
And the sure thing now is gone, and both regret.

Ain’t it funny how people who hurt you worst
Make promises to always save love first?

Well, it ain’t that funny
No, it ain’t that funny
I’m gonna tell ya that it
ain’t that funny at all

BRIDGE
It ain’t nothing I should lose any sleep over,
Though I lose sleep over losing you each night;
It ain’t nothing I can keep apologizing for,
Though it’s obvious I just can’t get it right.

8 BAR INSTRUMENTAL BRIDGE

Well, it ain’t that funny
No, it ain’t that funny
I’m gonna tell ya that it
Ain’t that funny at all

Well, it ain’t that funny
People, it just ain’t that funny
I’m calling out to you
It ain’t that funny at all

So why am I still laughing? (music fade)

Laughing Dolphin Music 			
28 November 2008

Hal · Accepted Answer

I can feel the rhythm of the verses. Not sure how the second two line verse fits with the rhythm  I found in the first part. The chorus fits nicely. Again not sure how the next two line verse fits. (these two line verses probably do fit somehow, I just can't find how they fit my mental rhythm of the others.) You might have to hum a few bars.....LOL  I can see how the bridge fits too. Little different rhythm there. Fits pretty good. Kinda upbeat country beat throughout. Nicely put together for the most part.

? · Answer

Lonely little chicken, resting on a spray, smelling the candy Autumn air and funky breeze, of which he is commencing to dig. Dancing on a department, making a song a candy lullaby,dwelling for the second, lest the second go him via. Singing in a tree, chirping high-quality little tunes, appearing for the entire rabbits, turtles, and the entire raccoons. Lonely little chicken, taking a tub on its own, craving corporation might come calling, in it is center might be a lot wealth. The equal little birdy, now a member of a flock, now desires a while by myself,what it wanted for used to be what it obtained. Now it is consistently surrounded via a number of mangy birds, consistently griping and gossiping utilizing language it on no account heard. The flock takes flight at dawn ,the vacation spot isn't recognized. But the little chicken will keep in the back of, it prefers to be by myself. Yes I like your chicken poem,your limericks have been all simply great, are there any alterations that are supposed to be made? Why sure, please cause them to RHYME

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I touched this lyrics piece up, and it rhymes better. Your thoughts?

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