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Here's a song I wrote a couple years ago.
Swimming With Daffodils
She works late at Hot Topic
She’s lookin’ kinda mean
Fifty pierces showing
And her blue hair’s fairly clean
Skin tight, holed-out jeans,
Pushed by about two-fitty,
You could be a true Christian
And still say she’s sort of pretty
CHORUS
And she’s followed her heart, changing her name
To something she really feels
Her mother used to call her Jane,
Now she’s Swimming With Daffodils
She left family in a fight
One bag that she could carry
Did whatever she wanted
Then married military
Freedom was ten times better
Than stares at the exchange
All the neighbors marveled
How she left and didn’t change
CHORUS
BRIDGE
Now she finally made her place
In a city that doesn’t mind her
And she’s found her path to faith and grace
Should one day her husband find her
She works late at Hot Topic
She’s lookin’ kinda mean
Sixty pierces showing
Her bright green hair’s fairly clean
Skin tight, holed-out jeans,
Pushed by about three-fitty,
You could be Wiccan just like her
And still say she’s sort of pretty
CHORUS
And she’s followed her heart, changing her name
To something she really feels
Her mother used to call her Jane,
Now she’s Swimming With Daffodils
And she’s followed her heart, changing her name
To Swimming With Daffodils
Swimming With Daffodils
Swimming With Daffodils
Laughing Dolphin Music
She's a big girl, hon. Actually, I morphed two real people to do this piece. There was a girl who became a Wiccan in Washington state, and there was a girl I used to guard in the mall in Nevada (guess which store?) and I put them together. The Wiccan girl's name was changed slightly to protect her true identity.
2 Answers
- David VLv 79 years agoFavorite Answer
Reads something like Steve Earle or Tom Waits might do. I think they are great lyrics. Thanks for sharing. Take care
dave
- 9 years ago
Sounds pretty good... except why is she changing her name to Swimming with Daffodils? That's a bit confusing. And what's two-fitty and three-fitty supposed to mean?
I'm guessing that this is a country song?