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Just wrote this in the poetry section off a prompt for an original piece about the moon. New lyrics! Like them?

I BLAME THE MOON

First more, now less than friends

Love ducked in and out again

This isn't where the story ends

But it's where I must contend

That the heart goes in innocent

All indications heaven sent

A chance to shine, a chance to vent

Another chance just came and went

CHORUS

It must be the moon playing tricks on me

I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide

But the swells are never done inside

Since I can't see why I'm still blue

But I see the moon - I blame you

You learn from sources more than school

The day starts warm and then ends cool

Gravity always makes its pull

Love seems to make me a fool

The only constant when things aren't right

Was that silver moon laughing bright

Hiding the truth from the morning light

Never revealing secrets of the night

CHORUS

It must be the moon playing tricks on me

I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide

But the swells are never done inside

Since I can't see why I'm still blue

But I see the moon - I blame you

Why must you meddle with my world like this?

Why can't you let me keep more than a kiss?

It must be the moon playing tricks on me

I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide

But the swells are never done inside

I'll never see why we are through

So damn the moon - I blame you

I blame the moon

I blame the moon

Laughing Dolphin Music

23 April, 2012

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  • 9 years ago
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    I like this one more than the others of yours I have recently seen.

    It flows nicely. Good job.

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