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Just wrote this in the poetry section off a prompt for an original piece about the moon. New lyrics! Like them?
I BLAME THE MOON
First more, now less than friends
Love ducked in and out again
This isn't where the story ends
But it's where I must contend
That the heart goes in innocent
All indications heaven sent
A chance to shine, a chance to vent
Another chance just came and went
CHORUS
It must be the moon playing tricks on me
I'd never ask for this kind of misery
Watching all turn with the tide
But the swells are never done inside
Since I can't see why I'm still blue
But I see the moon - I blame you
You learn from sources more than school
The day starts warm and then ends cool
Gravity always makes its pull
Love seems to make me a fool
The only constant when things aren't right
Was that silver moon laughing bright
Hiding the truth from the morning light
Never revealing secrets of the night
CHORUS
It must be the moon playing tricks on me
I'd never ask for this kind of misery
Watching all turn with the tide
But the swells are never done inside
Since I can't see why I'm still blue
But I see the moon - I blame you
Why must you meddle with my world like this?
Why can't you let me keep more than a kiss?
It must be the moon playing tricks on me
I'd never ask for this kind of misery
Watching all turn with the tide
But the swells are never done inside
I'll never see why we are through
So damn the moon - I blame you
I blame the moon
I blame the moon
Laughing Dolphin Music
23 April, 2012
1 Answer
- 9 years agoFavorite Answer
I like this one more than the others of yours I have recently seen.
It flows nicely. Good job.