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Good Or Bad Song....?

Its not the best, but I won't give up. What do I need to do to make this song better?

I wish I could do all the thing to you, like your boyfriend does, holding you, kissing you, loving you(Woah). Whenever we're alone together, we get on great, then your man comes in and I'm pushed out(Ouch...).

I wish I could hold you(Like that), kiss you(like that), put my hands on your hips whenever that amazing body moves(Like that). I'm jealous of the thought that he's the only one that gets to love you(Its not right)

You've got my heart bleeding, because of everything you do. I wish I could see you in the mornings, I wish I could hold you late at night, I said I wish I could love you, love you, love only you and nobody else.

I wish my words could be inside your heart, I wish I could be on your mind, I wish, oh how I wish. I wish you could grab my hand(And never let go), I wish you could smile at me(With those amazing lips), I wish, I wish, I wish I were him(Woah).

I try to get close with you, but whenever I do you, push me back(Please don't), I wanna be with you(Right now), I wanna see you(Every morning), I wanna hold you, kiss you and do everything with you.

I'm jealous of him, I'm jealous of the way you love him, I'm said I'm jealous, baby I'm jealous, baby I'm so jealous, jealous.

Said I wish I could...

Said I wish you could...

Said I'm jealous of everything you do, with him.

I wish I could(3X)

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  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    This is more like Fag music make it more poetic

  • Anonymous
    5 years ago

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