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? asked in Entertainment & MusicMusicLyrics · 8 years ago

Good Or Bad Song Lyrics...?

You've left my heart dying, as you walked out of the door and out of my life. I'm looking out of the window as I lie here in the dark, I wish you could see my, how you've left me, see I just can't seem to live without you(No...) I'm not even gonna doubt you...

Heart crying out, I wish you could see how you've left me. Can you hear these words I'm saying? As I sit here dying...

Chorus

Cause I'm lost without you

and I just can't doubt you

and there's something about you

I just can't live without you(Now...)

As I look back, I'm starting to realise how good my life was with you, but I took you for granted. Hey I'm sorry if I ever made you feel this way...

Say you'll come back someday, I'll change if I have too, because I just can't live without you.

Lost, lost without you(4X)

I didn't take long to write it, so it might not be much good :(

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  • 8 years ago
    Favorite Answer

    Good start so far. You can really feel these. They could use a little more alliteration and maybe rhyme a little more.

  • Ray
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    These aren't doing much for me!

    Source(s): myself
  • 8 years ago

    I think bad.

  • Anonymous
    8 years ago

    If it is sung in an upbeat way it will sound amazing!!!!!!!!

  • 8 years ago

    man it's great but you have to work on it more. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK !!!!!!!!!!.

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