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I need help editing a sentence.?

Is this sentence worded correctly? If not, how should it be?:

An administrative position in a service industry utilizing organizational, analytical, and communication skills.

THANKS!

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  • 8 years ago

    An administrative position in a service industry utilizes organizational, analytical, and communication skills.

  • EG
    Lv 7
    8 years ago

    its not a complete sentence.... did you leave out something ?

    for example. Tara was looking for an administrative position in the service industry; that requires utilizing organization, analytical and communication skills.

  • 8 years ago

    An Administrative position IS a service,not IN

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