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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 8 years ago

Opinions on my book idea so far?

1) what's you opinion on the whole, magic is illegal idea? I know it has been used before, but just curious.

2) What do you think about the overthrowing a corrupt government? (Background: my story starts out with a town getting bombed, and then you find out that the government ordered the bombing.)

3) Opinion on these names?

Alexander

Calix

Ebony

Kyra (my favorite, probably won't change it even if a lot of people say they don't like it.)

Xya

Pierce

4) Do you think if you were blindfolded for many years--five minimum--you would go blind? Or at least lose your sight for awhile until your eyes readjusted to brightness?

5) I need another name, for a nine year old boy. He's an orphan on the street, and that's really all I have in my head for him so far... It would have to kind of match my other names. It's a fantasy story if you can't tell by some of the names.

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  • 8 years ago
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    I like it being illegal.

    I'd overthrow the government. Maybe you could have the main character get an army together.

    I like all the names in my opinion. They are different. Different is good in books i think.

    THe light would be too bright to stand. You'd have to wear DARK sunglasses and or put a blindfold back where u can see just enouogh.

    Maybe the orphan boy could b called Seymour, Ray, Biily, Krishna, or Eric?

    Hope i helped

    Good luck

  • ?
    Lv 4
    5 years ago

    a million. Sounds too just like a scam of The Lord of the Rings with a couple of different fable factors. A significant, evil mountain named "Tortura"? = Mount Doom. Basically, this type of factor has been performed one million time and except you quite have some thing new so as to add, I would not do it once more. two. This one sounds adequate till you get to the facet wherein she is the "final human to own a designated time of magic". It's a little tacky and overdone. three. I cannot quite remark at the 3rd one, given that you will have indexed an occasion alternatively than an genuine plot. I cannot inform what any of that suggests within the context of an complete tale.

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