Looking for some constructive feedback. What do you think . . . ?

I had this assignment for a class in which I had to come up with a life's mission statement. Something in terms of how I want to live in all areas of life. This is what I came up with:

My mission is to live deeply in each moment in order to alleviate the suffering of both myself and others.

- I vow to do no harm and treat all I meet with peace, kindness, and compassion. I will live simply, with present moment awareness, and practice the virtue of generosity by sharing with those in need.

- I vow to take care of this body every day, with adequate exercise and proper nutrition, to aid in the care of the mind so I can have the strength to keep myself open to the suffering of the world.

- Above all else, I am to stress the importance of skillfulness in all I do physically, verbally, and mentally.

What do y'all think? I would appreciate any comments or feedback. Thank you & be well :)