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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesBooks & Authors · 7 years ago

Short sentence, help?

I keep starting my sentence with my main character's name or he and frankly, I'm tired of it. So could you help me with this sentence and suggest any tips to my problem? Thank you.

His curiosity sparked at the sight of the paper lying on the floor.

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  • Anonymous
    7 years ago
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    At the sight of the paper lying on the floor, his curiosity was sparked.

    The piece of paper lying on the floor sparked his curiosity.

    A piece of paper lying on the floor was enough to spark his curiosity.

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  • 7 years ago

    The crumpled wad of paper, nearly hidden in the corner, swept out of sight by the daily comings and goings, suddenly piqued his interest...

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