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please read and c/c my love poem?
Language and Love
Language and love standing in the mist
O a man be found and kept
As the sky are blue and the sun bright
O may God, of Love shower his
In love of blissful bless thankful
For by word Love all is held day
As being a child loved marry souls
He stands just in perfection Kings and Queens
As the world turns and friends of him play
O what a rainbow of color wheeled
As finger fiddle Franco Morone Terranova
As muff and strike He fills my soul
The knowing of you makes all of me
_please read and c/c my love poem?
_please read and c/c my love poem?
1 Answer
- JenniferLv 67 years agoFavorite Answer
I have read your poem and it's nicely done. I can catch the thoughts you covered inside the lines. It's a good feeling you have covered.
I would like to suggest you to be more poetic in selecting words for your poem lines.
Good work and Keep it up :)
