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Him
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He was
Tall, fair skinned, intelligent, and mine
In the race for first place
He left
All others behind
Capsuled in my arms
He didn’t
Fight to get away
Right there
Against my chest
He was happy
To stay
Some of you
May find this difficult
To wrap your head
Around it
But y’all
Sweat the small stuff
He’s the other
Half of
My soul
And I’m so glad
I found it
Now comes
The tough part
Can our relationship
Withstand it
Or will
We wither away
Like Pluto
Which is no longer a planet
I believe
I have faith
And a surplus
Of conviction
Say whatever you may
Through it all I’m staying
With him
Some of you
May find this difficult
To wrap your head
Around it
But y’all
Sweat the small stuff
He’s the other
Half of
My soul
And I’m so glad
I found it
The day has finally come
For us to begin a new life
Pride
Respect
And devotion
Y’all need a new life
We’ve talked about kids
Where we’ll live
The whole nine yards
What’s mine is his
And what’s his
Becomes ours
It’s the year 2014
Y’all need to get with
The times
Leave your prior notions
In the past
And
Leave ‘em behind
Some of you
May find this difficult
To wrap your head
Around it
But y’all
Sweat the small stuff
He’s the other
Half of
My soul
And I’m so glad
I found it
2 Answers
- ElysabethLv 77 years agoFavorite Answer
Love your chorus in those three places, but Pluto is the wrong comparison. Try an ice age dwindling away slowly.
- Anonymous7 years ago
You should apply to the mfa program at Columbia (new York) with me next year, if you can.