My poem, your opinion?

Very nice.

Here's one of mine like that. Do you ever make your poetry more lyrically accessible?

I Blame The Moon

First more, now less than friends

Love ducked in and out again

This isn't where the story ends

But it's where I must contend

That the heart goes in innocent

All indications heaven sent

A chance to shine, a chance to vent

Another chance just came and went

CHORUS

It must be the moon playing tricks on me - I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide, but the swells are never done inside

Since I can't see why I'm still blue

But I see the moon - I blame you

You learn from sources more than school

The day starts warm and then ends cool

Gravity always makes its pull

Love seems to make me a fool

The only constant when things aren't right

Was that silver moon laughing bright

Hiding the truth from the morning light

Never revealing secrets of the night

CHORUS

It must be the moon playing tricks on me - I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide, but the swells are never done inside

Since I can't see why I'm still blue

But I see the moon - I blame you

Why must you meddle with my world like this?

Why can't you let me keep more than a kiss?

It must be the moon playing tricks on me

I'd never ask for this kind of misery

Watching all turn with the tide

But the swells are never done inside

I'll never see why we are through

So damn the moon - I blame you

I blame the moon

I blame the moon

Laughing Dolphin Music

My day is weak when

I don't converse with you

You're rarely far from my mind

Though

I do have other things that I do

We haven't met yet

And it feels

Like an outright crime

Throughout the day

I ponder at times

About

Myself being yours

And you

Being mine