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? asked in Arts & HumanitiesPoetry · 6 years ago

Is this considered bad poetry?

Cease and behold! The flowery gate!

It stings my flesh with never ending sight

As I lay down in waste, hoping that

God will lay me down in the quietest of ways.

Usually my poems are intuitive and expressive, but lacking any real meaning. It's as if my poetic expression is bombarded by the shakles of the abyss! Is this considered bad poetry, or am I doing just fine?

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  • Anonymous
    6 years ago

    It is considered bad poetry. You are not doing just fine.

  • keith
    Lv 7
    6 years ago

    Dreadful

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