lovely soul with insite

"A dreamers world"

Moon cries pain, the suns dripping blood

Lost your faith redeem the flood

Hidden torments of lifelong fears

Can feel your hurt in future years

Mind of horror, a movie flick

it's all so true so take your pick

Can feel your hurt, can see your pain

Throughout your tears that flood like rain

A dreamers world is not a dreamers land

You can not enter if it's not liefs plan

You can not see the morning, nor see the sun

you can not enter with a magic wand

Eccentric artist, words of fire

Electrified paper, funeral pi re

If you do not understand what these words really mean

Then you really are not meant, to live a dream

"The Doors Of Preception; Heaven and Hell"

what would be green,

with pink pockets too.

A birthday present I am wrapping

that will especially you.

An example

I wrote this poem as answer to the Emily Dickinson poem! I call it "Snow White Queen of the Night"

I am death, I'm calling for you---

There's no where you can hide---

Now give to me your soul within---

I came to take your life.

Say your prayers on bended knees

today's our sacrifice

No more sorrow, tears inside pain

your body's gonna die.

Sweet love, Emily Dickinson

The night--- is calling you---

The reaper took roll,signed your name---

and he don't ever lose.

I am death--- pain inside sorrow---

You can not by pass me---

So when you wake, lost in abyss

The soul of Emily.

No fleshly body to take hold

No heart of burning love---

not another splintered finger---

No eyes to look above.

I'll take--- your hand---and guide--- you home,

travel through after life.

Forever, you'll belong to me,

Snow White Queen of the Night.

"You"

Your heart keeps calling to me, bringing sunshine to my soul.

Now that is the greatest feeling, that my body has ever known.

Each time that I get close to you, tingles shoot through my spine.

Suddenly my day halts, my world pauses, cause you stopped the hands of time.

I wish you knew how you make me feel, but I get it from your love.

I hope that this feeling has only started, and that it will never be done.

You electrify my soul, and bring meaning to my heart, before you, I was only sinking.

Now in my thoughts, their only about you, and that's all that I want my mind to be thinking.

Please tell me what to do, will you give me a reason, can you explain why I feel this way.

You, my love, are my everything, my morning, my night, and my day.

Your beauty in my eyes, is well admired, I hold it more precious than a priceless gem.

Each time that I, hold you close to me, you are as a soft petal to a rose, and I'm only asking to be your stem.

You are the reason, this greatest feeling, that my body has ever known.

Now I know, I have found my answer,it's because I love you with my heart, mind, body, and every inch of my soul.

You are the love of my life, the light in my heart. Your smile in the morning brings my day to start. You are my bright shinning star, and my warm afternoon. Only your hand I will hold as we walk in the moon

You're everything to me, you're everything that I dream.

Everything to me, you're everything that love should be.

You're everything that I do, my every dream come true.

You are everything to me, I am so in love with you.

Can we make pact that we will never part, because I'm telling you girl stole my heart. Tomorrow is not promised. We better live for today. You are the only woman that can take my pains away.

Because you're everything to me, You're everything that I dream.

You're everything to me, Everything that love should be.

You're everything that I do, my every dream come true.

You are everything to me, I am so in love with you.

I will blow you a kiss, through love with a song.

I know I have not known you, O so very long.

But my soul jumps for joy, when I look into your eyes.

Because you're everything to me, you are the love of my life.

I said that you're everything to me, put the love into what I write.

If you were to descride one thing that is beautiful to you what would it be? Your childs first scream, your first love, the stars, the moon, the sky. What is beautiful to you?

Hi, Alot of people tell me that I am good looking. Well ok I probably am. But I am also a very talented sing/songwriter.I am also a wonderful poet. But what my problem is for some reason I have a problem metting women. Maybe it is because I am very shy when it comes to them. It is really hard to believe though because I can get up front alot of people and sing without being shy. What should I do and how can I get over this problem.

Thanks

Your respones help me in my writing and my singing career. Good feed back and ever bad feed back so thank all of you very much.

Sweet soft roses, sealed with a kiss

Your honest open opions, is something

that I wouldn't miss.

You all are hidden angels in your own specail

way.

So I'd like to give me graditude, written to you

This way.

If all your words were a song, neither bad

nor good.

The music would be beautiful, and very well

understood.

what is love to you. Is it when you hold your child for the first time or when you have been married for fifty years and still get all gigglie when the one you love is near. what is love to you.

The Love Of My Life

You are the love of my life, the light inside my heart.

The smile in the morning that brings my day to a start.

You are my bright shinning star, and my warm afternoon.

The hand that I hold as I walk in the moon.

Tomorrow is not promised, lets live for today.

There could never be another woman that would ever be able to take your place.

Can we make a pact, that we will never part.

Cause I'm telling you girl that you stole my heart.

So many days ahead, and you make strive for the best.

I will give you my trust, cause I would give you no less.

Let me put it to you softly, with tears in my eyes.

You bring light to my heart, you're everything to me.

The love of my life.

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S Hello Ladies,Do you believe in dreams,do you believe love,What is your immaculate dream?

Do believe in dreams,a stroll with in your heart.

A movie of the mind,a souls script,your part.

Can they be accomplished,is your scene just full of love.

save a fairy princess,your angel from above.

Are you a mighty warrior,a traveler from a distant time.

a singer or a poet,expressing each word in rhymes.

can you see your future,do you dream just of the past.

Do you want dreams ending,filed away from first to last.

So how do you precieve,these doors opening in the mind.

can your dreams be accomplished,never leaving none behind.

So in your dreams are you a lover,a warrior,or a king.

a writer or a poet,a lyricists who sings.

always running from a monster,or falling off a bridge.

never understanding,never dying will always live.

So as I ask this question,Will Bitmore Scram,or just leave.

That will always be the answer,to the mystery within your dreams.

Do believe in dreams,a stroll with in your heart.

A movie of the mind,a souls script,your part.

Can they be accomplished,is your scene just full of love.

save a fairy princess,your angel from above.

Are you a mighty warrior,a traveler from a distant time.

a singer or a poet,expressing each word in rhymes.

can you see your future,do you dream just of the past.

Do you want dreams ending,filed away from first to last.

So how do you precieve,these doors opening in the mind.

can your dreams be accomplished,never leaving none behind.

So in your dreams are you a lover,a warrior,or a king.

a writer or a poet,a lyricists who sings.

always running from a monster,or falling off a bridge.

never understanding,never dying will always live.

So as I ask this question,Will Bitmore Scram,or just leave.

That will always be the answer,to the mystery within your dreams.

thing to them I was told there were true hearted woman out there.I do not believe it to be true.I believe its too good to be true

Is true love only a dream,or just a picture show.

is it really what it seems,does love live within your soul.

is it only of the mind,to see an actor in the movie.

or is love really true,can it really move me.

sometimes you ask yourself that question,most people gave up hope.

because they believe loves not so true, they take it as a joke.

is love only a movie,is it true,or can you really find it.

or should I leave my quest alone,and never look behind me.

I have this picture,I can never let it go,

That I keep within my heart,it lives within my soul.

It seems to be true love,most the time never working out.

A beautiful wife,lovely children,a yard,and a big house.

but often I'm being hurt,because loves not what it used to be.

Why is love painful,why does it hurt,is it only just me.

still I hold onto this picture,it will be in my heart forever.

someday I might find true love,someday maybe never.

so if you have a picture,of true love deep within your heart.

never let it go because that is where true love will start.

I wrote it for my friends son that is in the hospital.

You taught me how to love and laugh,each time you made me smile.

You showed me where to find my tears,hadn't cried for awhile.

Each chance I get to see you,my soul it shouts with joy.

Gus, a man of respect,not a little boy.

I love to watch your mother read,to you a book you like.

The both of you togethers love,still lingers throughout the night.

I still miss the days I helped you out,if I had the chance I'd do it again.

Not because of your situation,because I love you and you my friend.

Each day I think about you,even the whatevers you tell me and say.

Each time your voice would speak those words,in your sarcastic little way.

These words I could speak to anybody,to many each line would not be true.

But I had to give them like this,Because I could not say these words to you.

So as I end my little rhyme,written with love and truth.

You took a man with anger and hate,and reunited him with his youth.

For some reason there is no way you could ever be together.What would you do and how would you feel.Would you let it go.

Dreams are sometimes wisdom

sometimes your future life.

Dreams are intertainment,

sometimes they bring insight.

Dreams will make you happy,

at times your mind gets scared.

dreams will bring you love,

people dreaming everywhere.

So how do you feel about dreams,

do you remember each dream ,each time.

can you see the love,

that is hidden in this rhyme.