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Ahmed Waheed Sarmed
www.waheedsarmed.wordpress.com
Plz Critique my New Poem [Viewz/Reviewz]?
That season
The wicked storm
Hit my little shack
In that night so black
And smacked
All I had
The worst of its kind
Ever witnessed!
Winds as a monster
Rains as my tear
Dark as my shadow
On the broken window
And
Fear as a running deer
I had the hope
To cope
With what I faced
But
Errors made once
Cannot be changed an ounce
I wander
And feel sorry for the
Squander
The filthy fate
Caused
(C) Ahmed Waheed Sarmed
2 AnswersPoetry1 decade agoThat Season?
That season
The wicked storm
Hit my little shack
In that night so black
And smacked
All I had
The worst of its kind
Ever witnessed!
Winds as a monster
Rains as my tear
Dark as my shadow
On the broken window
And
Fear as a running deer
I had the hope
To cope
With what I faced
But
Errors made once
Cannot be changed an ounce
I wander
And feel sorry for the
Squander
The filthy fate
Caused
(C) Ahmed Waheed Sarmed
Waiting for your feedback(s)
1 AnswerPoetry1 decade ago