Melissa

Hi guys and girls!

I am writing a story and would like to get some basic hous decriptions from you.

The basics is - its set on a beach type area.

In my story there is a husband, wife and three children.

So four bedrooms would be good.

But you are frees to decribe the house and however many bedrooms you would have.

I am having my people go house hunting so I need a few houses.

Thank-you :)

At seventeen Rebecca Anderson told her parents she was pregnant while her mum was reassuring her step-father was appualled and immediately forced her to leave home with nothing other then the clothes on her back, with no where to go Rebecca realised she was more alone then ever.

While six years travelled by Rebecca is still doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation with her son in tow, unsure each time if she will find somewhere else to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

While stealing a car from her step-father's garage Rebecca encounters her younger sister - seeing that Rachel is being abused Rebecca knows she can't leave Rachel behind.

Moving to New York City changes the lives of Rachel, Rebecca and her son Daniel as they are living on the streets in a rather large city, Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent and sister but when attempting to secure a job Daniel and Rachel are left on the streets of the city by themselves only to be tempted by a stranger with food an suddenly abducted.

Finding her son and sister missing is Rebecca's worst nightmare - only to be handed a note by a stranger signed STL.

Rebecca now aware the children were abducted by wealthy multi time billionarie Sean Lawson she knows she has no other choice then to fight the impossible Sean to rescue the son she once resented and protect the sister she loves.

With her mother and stepfather seeking Rachel - Rebecca knows she has know other choice then to fend of the police and privet detectives while she races against the clock to free the two people that mean the most.

But what she is yet to realise is Sean has bigger plans for both the children and Rebecca.

I know there is a lot of Grammar errors but ignoring that for the present moment - is this something you would read?

I have a lot to fill in but this is the basic plot.

Um you might want to know that the police and FBI won't help Rebecca find the children because Sean is very wealthly, so wealthy he pays people off - even police.

I also want to change Rachels name - any advice on which name?

What do you think??????

At seventeen Rebecca Anderson told her parents she was pregnant while her mum was reassuring her step-father was appualled and immediately forced her to leave home with nothing other then the clothes on her back, with no where to go Rebecca realised she was more alone then ever.

While six years travelled by Rebecca is still doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation with her son in tow, unsure each time if she will find somewhere else to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

While stealing a car from her step-father garage Rebecca encounter her younger sister - seeing that Rachel is being abused Rebecca knows she can't leave Rachel behind.

Moving to New York City changes the lives of Rachel, Rebecca and her son Daniel as they are living on the streets in a rather big city, Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent and sister but when attempting to secure a job Daniel and Rachel are left on the streets of the city by themselves only to be tempted by a stranger with food an suddenly abducted.

When her son and sister are abducted by wealthy multi time billionarie Sean Lawson Rebecca has no other choice then to fight the impossible Sean to rescue the son she once resented and protect the sister she loves.

With her mother and stepfather seeking Rachel - Rebecca knows she has know other choice then to fend of the police and privet detectives while she races against the clock to free the two people that mean the most.

But what she is yet to realise is Sean has bigger plans for both the children and Rebecca.

What do you think??????

I am writing a novel.

In my novel I have a single mother, who was kicked out of home as a teenager when she fell pregnant. She resents her son and when they are kicked from there last available accommodation Rebecca steals a car and moves her son to New York where she has a plan. Though not everything goes according to plan when her son is kidnapped by multi time billionaire Sean Lawson. Sean has bigger plans for Rebecca, as he watches her fight for the son she once resented.

I have a question as to whether you guys think I should have Rebecca take her sister as well, when she steals the car to run away her little sister sees her . Rachel is upset and being abused by the stepfather. Should Rebecca take Rachel with her and then Sean kidnap both Rachel and the little boy Daniel.

His reason for abducting them is his girlfriend died in a car accident with his daughter, she was also pregnant with his son ...

Rebeccas mother an stepfather would be seeking Rachel - looking for her everywhere. They would have cops on the tail - privet detectives.. So on so Rebecca would need to rescue the son she resented an the sister she needs to protect...

My one paragraph summary for the story so far is -

At seventeen Rebecca Anderson told her parents she was pregnant, abandoned by them Rebecca must do it alone. Six years on she's still doing it tough with her son in tow, they are kicked out of there only available accomodation. Moving to New York City changes Rebecca's way of life forcing her to step up and become a better parent. When her son is abducted by wealthy multi time billionarie Sean Lawson Rebecca must fight the impossible Sean to rescue the son she once resented.

But I will change if you think I should include the sister. :)

Let me know what you think?

What's your opinion???

I am writing a novel.

In my novel I have a single mother, who was kicked out of home as a teenager when she fell pregnant. She resents her son and when they are kicked from there last available accommodation Rebecca steals a car and moves her son to new York where she has a plan. Though not everything goes according to plan when her son is kidnapped by multi time billionaire Sean Lawson. Sean has bigger plans for Rebecca, as he watches her fight for the son she once resented.

I have a question as to whether you guys think I should have Rebecca take her sister as well, when she steals the car to run away her little sister sees her . Rachel is upset and being abused by the stepfather. Should Rebecca take Rachel with her and then Sean kidnap both Rachel and the little boy Daniel.

His reason for abducting them is his girl die in a car accident with his daughter, she was also pregnant with his son ...

Rebeccas mother an stepfather would be seeking Rachel - looking for her everywhere. They would have cops on the tail - privet detectives.. So on so Rebecca would need to rescue the son she resented an the sister she needs to protect...

Let me know what you think?

What's your opinion???

My heart was thumping hard almost as if it would jump out of my chest at any second. Staring at the wooden door in front of me I knew I was doing this because I now had no other choice, reaching for the silver hand crafted doorknob I watched as my hand shook with nerves.

He wasn’t going to like this, he would most likely shout at me but that was nothing new he hated me from the moment he meet me.

When I refer to he I of course mean my stepfather – Craig Anderson.

Leaning forward I twist the doorknob listening as I creaking sound echoed threw my ears. Sitting at the large wooden oak desk that is buried deep under paperwork is my stepfather. My mother is seat quietly on his lap frowning at the computer screen in front of her, I couldn’t see what she was looking at though I knew it was important- anything discussed in this room was important. As I took two tiny steps into the room I noticed how they pretended I wasn’t even there.

‘Mom dad, I need to tell you something…please this is important’ My stepfather looked up from the screen briefly his facial expression one of curiousity, I could feel the nerves rattling threw my body making my hands shake quickly hiding them behind my back I noticed the way my stepfathers eyebrow rose.

‘Something you need Rebecca?’ His voice sounded smooth, calm even though I had a suspition it was far from the case, he disliked it very much if he was interrupted during his moments with my mother.

‘I need to tell you something’ I repeated softly as my mother glanced up from the computer her frown disappearing the moment she laid eyes on me.

‘What’s wrong darling?’ My mom asked as she flicked a piece of her blonde hair out of her eyes.

‘I’m pregnant’ The words escaped my lips in nothing above a whisper and for once I couldn’t hold their gaze, looking down at my stomach I knew they would be able to tell – it was obvious.

‘Becca please’ My mother Donna said quietly her tone disbelieving as my gaze found hers again, the tears that were threatening to pour down my cheeks I tried to blink away.

‘Mommy please, I’m so sorry’

‘Becca’ My mother whispered as she stood up quickly taking the few short steps towards me. I could feel the tears coming on stronger as a few small ones escaped my already damp eyes.

‘I’m so sorry’ Was all I could manage to say as my mother the only person I ever trusted wrapped her arms around me tightly.

‘It’s okay Becca…we can figure this out’ My mother murmured softly as she pulled my into a tighter hug, I eyed my stepfather carefully over my mothers shoulder to see him staring at me intently, his eyes ful of rage.

‘How on earth could you be so stupid? Your seventeen!’ He growled out threw his clenched jaw his eyes narrowing as he regarded my stomach.

‘Dad’

‘Your not nearly old enough to raise a child Rebecca’ Craig said loudly as he ran a hand threw his thick jet black hair.

‘Dad I’ I didn’t even get to finished my sentence as he silenced me with that look he used when he was scolding either me or my sister, I dropped my gaze to the floor immediately and I heard him breathe a heavy sigh.

‘You can’t raise this child Rebecca, you can’t keep it’

I couldn’t believe what I had just heard, I couldn’t do that not to my child my little peanut whether this child was planned or not I would never look towards abortion.

‘Dad’ I peeked up threw my eyelashes to see him standing there his eyebrow raised and his eyes narrowed I could feel my body wanting to recoil but I couldn’t do it I couldn’t abort a child. ‘Dad please’

‘No Rebecca if you want this child you can’t live here. You have shamed your mother and I, we raised you better’ My stepfather didn’t give me time to respond he turned on his heel and marched over to the door stopping shortly when he saw my little sister standing there.

‘What’s going on Beccy?’ My little sister Rachel asked quietly as she quickly scattered over to where my mother and I were standing.

‘Oh honey’ Was all I could manage as I reached forward and pulled Rachel into a gently hug.

‘Beccy?’

‘I have to go away for a while Rach…you’ll be okay’ I whispered into her ear softly as I pulled away.

‘I see you have made your decision then’ My stepfather said gruffly from the doorway and all I could do was nod.

‘I am not a soulless monster like you, I can’t abort a baby to satisfy you or anyone else’

Please let me know what you think - I am looking for someone who is willing to read the other 3 pages and give me critical feedback.

If you are interested my email is - melissa_babe94@live.co.uk

Thanks guys.

let me know what you think. (:

She thought they were done with the lies and secrets, but when two mysterious women appear, she find out she is only just beginning to understand the life of her fiance. There love is challenged as people return, people fall sick, pregnancy's occur and death is on the brink.

What do you think is a good title for this story?

Against everyones better judgement she decided to marry the badest boy in town, but when secrets come out flying will she be able to forgive him one last time?

Or;

She thought they were done with the lies and secrets, but when two mysterious women appear, she find out she is only just beginning to understand the life of her fiance. There love is challenged as people return, people fall sick, pregnancy's occur and death is on the brink.

Or;

The past always has a way of catching up with you, especially when your past is two mysterious women. Can the love of your life stick by you threw the lies and secrets or will it all be to much for her?

Which one to do you think is best?

Futhermore in the 3rd story 'the size of the sky' we read of a young guy and his perceptions of the new neighbour next door. Marco assumes his neighbor is 'Gay' as he catches Liam painting his toe nails blue in public.

As Marco is trying to fit in with people at school and in his neighbourhood her tries to talk bad about Liam for being gay though he finds it difficult.

Though Liam being gay gives Marco a reason to feel as though it is safe for girlfriend Gina to hang out with him.

Early on in the story Marco learns that both him and Liam share the same magic moment, this is MArco's first indiction that he might be attracted to Liam, from this moment forward MArco's perceptions of Liam begin to change dramatically.

When marco and Gina arrive home one day to see Liam with a family and small baby, Gina begins to want a child leading to an argument between herself and Marco.

Gina goes on holiday sending only a letter to Marco telling him they should breakup, without reading the full letter Marco finds out Liam is back from his holiday and Liam invites Marco over for a dinner 'Date'.

Marco fussed over what to wear and even picks flowers for Liam unware that Liam is simply asking him over for dinner to talk. When Marco arrives at Liam's he hides the flowers behind his back, Liam proceeds to tell Marco that he had meet with Gina in Bali and they were planning on having a child together. Marco feels rather embarrassed and is thankful he hid the flowers behind his back, wishing he had read the rest of the letter Marco runs from the house and up the hill, he realizes that thou Liam is not gay, Marco himself might be..

What do you think? Does it give an overview of Marcos perceptions?

Sixteen year old Rebecca Anderson leads a respectable life with mother Donna, step-father Craig and adorable little sister Rachel. To the disgust of her step-father Rebecca chooses to spend the eve of her seventeenth birthday with captin of the swimming squad Mitchell Watts not realizing this one night would change her life for the worst.

Three weeks after her seventeenth birthday Rebecca finds out she is indeed pregnant with Mitchells child.

Knowing that bearing a child will shame her familys name in the small town of Branchville Rebecca chooses to keep the information to herself only telling Mitchell, who immediatly denys the child is his.

As the next thirteen weeks pass Rebecca begins to grow, knowing her parents will become suspious Rebecca realises she has no other choice then to tell them. While her mother is reassuring her step-father is appualled and immediately orders her to leave the house if she wishes to keep the child with nothing other then the clothes on her back. Abandoned by her parents, friend and father of her child Rebecca realises she is more alone then ever.

After the complicated birth of her son Daniel, Rebecca recieves a small soft brown bear threw the mail from the mother who shunned her. The bear representing that while Daniel is there grandchild they must shun him too.

The next six years travel by slowly both Rebecca and Daniel are doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation in order to keep a roof over there heads, unsure each time if they will find somewhere to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

Realizing there is nothing left for them in the small town of Branchville Rebecca breaks into a neighbouring house to steal a car. Moving to New York City changes the lives of both Rebecca and Daniel as they are forced to live on the streets of a rather large city. Unable to cope Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent thou when attemping to secure a job she leaves Daniel on the street outside a dim lit bar only for him to be tempted by a stranger with food, none the wiser Daniel reaches for the food which leads to his abduction.

When Rebecca returns to the street she doesn't expect to find Daniel missing, finding the note made it all seem worse - What the note told her made the panic set in. Daniel had been abducted and Rebecca suddenly realised how much she loved him.

Going straight to the police Rebecca was shocked when she realised how unwilling they were to help her as the abductor was Sean Lawson - Unsure of herself Rebecca realises she must rescue her son alone.

Rebecca sets out to fight multi time billionarie for the son she once resented, but what she is yet to find out is that he has bigger plans for both mother and child.

Let me know what you think :)

Few Questions?!

* Would it be a little better if the mother was the one to kick the girl out?

* Instead of New York - Should I have another location less used in stories? If so where would you like to see? - Somewhere a multi time billionaire would live?

* Is there anything missing from the story?

* Most likely will be another book later on..

Thanks guys!

Sixteen year old Rebecca Anderson leads a respectable life with mother Donna, step-father Craig and adorable little sister Rachel. To the disgust of her step-father Rebecca chooses to spend the eve of her seventeenth birthday with captin of the swimming squad Mitchell Watts not realizing this one night would change her life for the worst.

Three weeks after her seventeenth birthday Rebecca finds out she is indeed pregnant with Mitchells child.

Knowing that bearing a child will shame her familys name in the small town of Branchville Rebecca chooses to keep the information to herself only telling Mitchell, who immediatly denys the child is his.

As the next thirteen weeks pass Rebecca begins to grow, knowing her parents will become suspious Rebecca realises she has no other choice then to tell them. While her mother is reassuring her step-father is appualled and immediately orders her to leave the house if she wishes to keep the child with nothing other then the clothes on her back. Abandoned by her parents, friend and father of her child Rebecca realises she is more alone then ever.

After the complicated birth of her son Daniel, Rebecca recieves a small soft brown bear threw the mail from the mother who shunned her. The bear representing that while Daniel is there grandchild they must shun him too.

The next six years travel by slowly both Rebecca and Daniel are doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation in order to keep a roof over there heads, unsure each time if they will find somewhere to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

Realizing there is nothing left for them in the small town of Branchville Rebecca breaks into a neighbouring house to steal a car. Moving to New York City changes the lives of both Rebecca and Daniel as they are forced to live on the streets of a rather large city. Unable to cope Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent thou when attemping to secure a job she leaves Daniel on the street outside a dim lit bar only for him to be tempted by a stranger with food, none the wiser Daniel reaches for the food which leads to his abduction.

When Rebecca returns to the street she doesn't expect to find Daniel missing, finding the note made it all seem worse - What the note told her made the panic set in. Daniel had been abducted and Rebecca suddenly realised how much she loved him.

Going straight to the police Rebecca was shocked when she realised how unwilling they were to help her as the abductor was Sean Lawson - Unsure of herself Rebecca realises she must rescue her son alone.

Rebecca sets out to fight multi time billionarie for the son she once resented, but what she is yet to find out is that he has bigger plans for both mother and child.

Thinking? Please let me know!

What can I do to make it better?

Would you read this if it was a book?

At seventeen Rebecca Anderson told her parents she was pregnant while her mum was reassuring her father was appualled and immediately forced her to leave home with nothing other then the clothes on her back, with no where to go Rebecca realised she was more alone then ever.

While six years travelled by Rebecca is still doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation with her son in tow, unsure each time if she will find somewhere else to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

Moving to New York City changes the lives of both Rebecca and son Daniel as they are living on the streets in a rather big city, Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent but when attempting to secure a job Daniel is left on the streets of the city by himself only to be tempted by a stranger with food an suddenly abducted.

When her son is abducted by wealthy multi time billionarie Sean Lawson Rebecca has no other choice then to fight the impossible Sean to rescue the son she once resented, what she isn't aware of is Sean has bigger plans for both Daniel and herself.

What do you think?

At seventeen Rebecca Anderson told her parents she was pregnant while her mum was reassuring her father was appualled and immediately forced her to leave home with nothing other then the clothes on her back, with no where to go Rebecca realised she was more alone then ever.

While six years travelled by Rebecca is still doing it tough travelling from accomodation to accomodation with her son in tow, unsure each time if she will find somewhere else to stay. For the past six months they have been able to call a little run down motel room their home until the ill-tempered owner throws them onto the street without a second glance and suddenly Rebecca is forced to take control.

Moving to New York City changes the lives of both Rebecca and son Daniel as they are living on the streets in a rather big city, Rebecca is forced to step up and become a better parent but when attempting to secure a job Daniel is left on the streets of the city by himself only to be tempted by a stranger with food an suddenly abducted.

When her son is abducted by wealthy multi time billionarie Sean Lawson Rebecca has no other choice then to fight the impossible Sean to rescue the son she once resented, what she isn't aware of is Sean has bigger plans for both Daniel and herself.

Let me know what you think?

Hey guys!

I'm looking for someone to edit a story I am currently writing! If you are interested and would be able to help me improve it, I would love to hear from you.

Just drop your email address below and I will email you!

I currently am so unsure of how to work this site ahah .

But drop your email address and I will email you asap.

Thanks guys.!

Hi there all;

looking for a wonderful person to edit my story, someone who is going to be able to give me some constructive criticism, talk with me about my story and we able to help me in general.

Email me if you are interested. :)

Thanks guys.

‘Mom dad, I need to tell you something’ I glanced around my father’s small office the walls were lined with bookshelves holding many of the books my parents had collected over the years taking two tiny steps towards my father’s small dark wooden desk which was buried under paperwork in the corner of his office I looked up to see my mom was sitting on my dad’s lap looking at something on his computer, I couldn’t see what they were looking at but it must have been interesting as they didn’t even glance up as I entered the room. ‘Mom dad please this is important’ I looked over towards them to see my dad look up from the screen briefly his facial expression turning to concern when he saw my face, I felt nervous and it made me wonder if he could see it.

‘What’s wrong honey?’ My mom asked as she glanced up from the computer the playful smile she was wearing still in place.

‘I’m pregnant’ The words escaped my mouth in a whisper and for once I couldn’t hold their gaze, my mother’s smile faded from her lips into a frown.

‘Oh Becca, please tell me this is your idea of a joke’ My mother Donna glanced over at me her eyes questioning me as she glimpsed down at my stomach only to see that my hand was neatly rested upon my bump.

‘Mommy, I’m so sorry’ I couldn’t help the few small tears that escaped my already damp eyes as I saw her reaction turn to shock.

‘Darling’ My mom whispered as she came towards me wrapping her arms tightly around me. ‘It’s okay Becca we will figure it out’ I gripped onto my mom and eyed my dad over her shoulder my gaze quickly dropping when I saw the look on his face. I could see it in his eyes the way he regarded my stomach that he was experiencing so many emotions and then I saw it flash threw his eyes the reaction I had been dreading.

‘Daddy’

‘How could you be so stupid Rebecca? Your seventeen not nearly old enough to raise a child’ My dad growled out through his teeth his eyes narrowing as he looked towards me, I watched as he ran a hand threw his thick jet black hair.

‘Dad I’ I didn’t even get to finished my sentence as he silenced me with that look he used when he was scolding either me or my sister, I dropped my gaze to the floor immediately and I heard him breathe a heavy sigh.

‘You can’t raise this child Rebecca, you can’t keep it’ I couldn’t believe what I had just heard, I couldn’t do that not to my child my little peanut whether this child was planned or not I would never look towards abortion.

‘Daddy’ I peeked up threw my eyelashes to see him standing there his eyebrow raised and his eyes narrowed I could feel my body wanting to recoil but I couldn’t do it I couldn’t abort a child. ‘Daddy please’

‘No Rebecca if you want this child you can’t live here. You have shamed your mother and I, we raised you better’ My dad didn’t give me time to respond he turned on his heel and marched over to the door and walking slammed it loudly behind him the noise echoing through the small office and I was left in my mother’s arms with a major decision to make, did I want to keep this child?

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‘Mommy, mommy, mommy’

I shiver in my sleep restlessly groaning softly as I pull my arm from under my head, I can hear those words they seem so real like it wasn’t a part of my dream, but where would they be coming from?

It was normal for me to hear that single word that put together formed a sentence, I hear them in my dreams haunting me while I sleep, I try my hardest to cover my ears bury my head deeper into the pillow hoping that word will fade into the distance, but that never happens they always reappear in the sound of his innocent voice.

‘Mom’

There’s that word again that particular word I never wanted to hear, rolling onto my side I hope to escape the sound of his voice, hope to block out that word. It doesn’t work I can feel his hand on my arm and I try to push it away fend him off.

It works his hand disappears and then I hear it it’s that word again thou this time it comes from a trembling voice, I know what he is doing he’s making me believe he will start to cry, he knows I can’t handle it when he cries.

Opening one eye I glance over to the side of the bed to see him standing there, his old blue pyjama's too short for his arms, he had out grew them months ago but I just couldn't afford new ones then and I can’t afford them now. His dark brown hair is tussled and his big green eyes are standing out against his pale white skin, his cheek bones clearly outlined as if he hasn't eaten for months.

I suppose I should feel sorry for him, that I should feel guilty but I don't he is the reason I can’t afford to eat let alone feed him, he is the reason I can't afford new clothes.

'Mommy I’s hungry, I want something to eat' I watch his full pale lips turn into a pout as he stands next to my bed clutching a warn dirty teddy bear, it is the only gift he has received from my mother the only thing that shows she remotely c

‘Mom dad, I need to tell you something’ I glanced around my father’s small office my mom was sitting on my dad’s lap looking at something on his computer. ‘Mom dad please this is important’ I looked over towards them to see my dad look up from the screen briefly his facial expression turning to concern as he saw my nervous smile.

‘What’s wrong honey?’ My mom asked as she glanced up her delightful smile never leaving her lips.

‘I’m pregnant’ The words escaped my mouth in a whisper and for once I couldn’t hold there gaze, my mother’s smile faded from her lips into a frown.

‘Oh Becca, please tell me this is your idea of a joke’ My mother Donna glanced over at me her eyes questioning me as she glimpsed down at my stomach only to see that my hand was neatly rested upon my bump.

‘Mommy, I’m so sorry’ I couldn’t help the few small tears that escaped my already damp eyes as I saw her reaction turn to shock.

‘Darling’ My mom whispered as she came towards me wrapping her arms tightly around me. ‘It’s okay Becca we will figure it out’ I gripped onto my mom and eyed my dad over her shoulder my gaze quickly dropping when I saw the look on his face. I could see it in his eyes the way he regarded my stomach that he was experiencing so many emotions and then I saw it flash through his eyes the reaction I had been dreading.

‘Daddy’

‘How could you be so stupid Rebecca? Your seventeen not nearly old enough to raise a child’ My dad growled out through his teeth his eyes narrowing as he looked towards me, I watched as he ran a hand threw his thick jet black hair.

‘Dad I’ I didn’t even get to finished my sentence as he silenced me with that look he used when he was scolding either me or my sister, I dropped my gaze to the floor immediately and I heard him breathe a heavy sigh.

‘You can’t raise this child Rebecca, you can’t keep it’ I couldn’t believe what I had just heard, I couldn’t do that not to my child my little peanut whether this child was planned or not I would never look towards abortion.

‘Daddy’ I peeked up threw my eyelashes to see him standing there his eyebrow raised and his eyes narrowed I could feel my body wanting to recoil but I couldn’t do it I couldn’t abort a child. ‘Daddy please’

‘No Rebecca if you want this child you can’t live here. You have shamed your mother and I, we raised you better’ My dad didn’t give me time to respond he turned on his heel and marched over to the door and walked out slamming it behind him, I was left in my mother’s arms with a major decision to make, did I want to keep this child?

‘Mommy, mommy, mommy’

I shivered in my sleep those words they seem so real like it wasn’t a part of my dream, but where would they be coming from?

It was normal for me to hear that single word that put together formed a sentence, I hear them in my dreams haunting me while I sleep, I try my hardest to cover my ears bury my head deeper in the pillow hoping that word will fade into the distance, but that never happens they always reappear in the sound of his innocent voice.

‘Mom’

There’s that word again that particular word I never wanted to hear, rolling onto my side I hope to escape the sound of his voice, hope to block out that word. It doesn’t work I can feel his hand on my arm and I try to push it away fend him off. It works his hand disappears and then I hear it it’s that word again thou this time it comes from a trembling voice, I know what he is doing he’s making me believe he will start to cry, he knows I can’t handle when he cries.

Opening one eye I glance over to the side of the bed to see him standing there, his old blue pyjama's too short for his arms, he had out grew them months ago but I just couldn't afford new ones then and I can’t afford them now. His dark brown hair is tussled and his big green eyes are standing out against his pale white skin, his cheek bones clearly outlined as if he hasn't eaten for months.

I suppose I should feel sorry for him, that I should feel guilty but I don't he is the reason I can’t afford to eat let alone feed him, he is the reason I can't afford new clothes.

'Mommy I’s hungry' I watch his full pale lips turn into a pout as he stands next to my bed clutching a warn dirty teddy bear, it was the only gift he had from my mother the only thing that shows she remotely cared about him. ‘I want something to eat’ Seeing his lips move again and look of desire for food in his eyes were too much to handle scrambling out of the brown dirty blanket I race towards the bathroom slamming the door behind me and locking it.

Sinking to my knees I place my head in my hands and rocked back and forward gently, I would do anything for the last six years to just disappear, I remember the time which seems so long ago that I wanted him but since he was born everything just seemed to fall apart

'Momma' Hearing that word it forced a whimper to escape my lips as I glanced around th

‘Father Mother, I’m pregnant’ I gaze up at my father the man I idolized to see that he was standing there his hands on his hips, his lips spread into a grim line as he glared down at me.

‘Oh Rebecca, please tell me this is your idea of a joke’ My mother Donna glanced over at me her tears strolling down her cheeks but I couldn’t tell her what she wanted to hear.

‘Mother, I’m so sorry’ I couldn’t help the tears that started to poor down my already damp cheeks, I couldn’t stand the way she looked at me my mother was ashamed I could see it in her eyes the way her gaze darted from my stomach to the floor. ‘Father’ I looked up to see him scowling at me he too looked ashamed but much angrier then my mother.

‘How could you be so stupid Rebecca? Your seventeen not nearly old enough to raise a child’ My father growled out through his teeth his eyes narrowing as he looked towards me.

‘Father I’ I didn’t even get to finished my sentence as he silenced me with that look he used when he was scolding either me or my sister, I dropped my gaze to the floor immediately and I heard him breathe a heavy sigh.

‘This child cannot be, you must rid of this child immediately’ I couldn’t believe what I had just heard, I couldn’t do that not to my child my little peanut whether this child was planned or not I would never look towards abortion.

‘Daddy’ I peeked up threw my eyelashes to see him standing there his eyebrow raised and his eyes narrowed I could feel my body wanting to recoil but I couldn’t do it I couldn’t rid myself of a child. ‘Daddy please’

‘No Rebecca if you want this child you leave this house. You have shamed your mother and I, you have shamed this family’s name’ My father didn’t give me time to respond he turned on his heel and marched over to the door beckoning my mother to follow.

‘Mommy’

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'Mummy, Mummy, Mummy'

Those words they haunt my dreams, I hear them when I wake up I hear them when I sleep. I try my hardest to cover my ears in hope it'll just fade away.

'Mummy, Mummy, Mummy'

There they are again those words, those words I never wanted to hear. Opening one eye I glance over to the side of the bed to see him standing there, his old blue pyjama's too short for his arms, he had out grew them months ago but I just couldn't afford new ones then and I can’t afford them now. His dark brown hair is tussled and his big green eyes are standing out against his pale white skin, his cheek bones clearly outlined as if he hasn't eaten for months.

I suppose I should feel sorry for him, that I should feel guilty but I don't he is the reason I can’t afford to eat let alone feed him, he is the reason I can't afford new clothes.

'Mummy'

There's that word again glancing over at him I see the tears welding in his eyes and I just couldn't handle it scrambling out of the brown dirty blanket I race towards the bathroom slamming the door behind me and locking it.

Sinking to my knees I place my head in my hands and rocked back and forward gently, I would do anything for the last six years to just disappear, I remember the time which seems so long ago that I wanted him.

Staring at my father I could see the anger burning in his eyes, he scared me always but right now he terrified me.

Glancing to the left I see my mother curled up on the couch tears falling silently down her cheeks as she tried to ignore my presence, I feel bad for hurting them for making them ashamed of me but I could never do what they are expecting of me.

Looking back over at my father I can see the pain an anger circling through his veins as he walked swiftly towards me never dropping my gaze.

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“You have shamed your mother and myself, you have shamed our family” My father growled at me as he dropped his gaze towards my stomach, I tried to stop the tears from welding in my eyes but I couldn't the emotions I felt were indescribable, I made them ashamed of me and now I had to deal with the consequences of my actions.

"If you want to have this child you will leave this house and never return" My father said his voice softer this time but his eyes still showed his true emotions his eyes revealed what I didn't want to see.

"Father" I whispered but he shook his head roughly.

"You are no longer welcome in this house Rebecca" My father said gruffly as he twisted on his heel taking my mother with him as he slammed the door to his office shut leaving me there cradling my baby bump.

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'Mummy'

Hearing that word it forced a whimper to escape my lips as I glanced around the bathroom in search for an escape only to find there was none.

The bathroom was small it contained only the basics a small shower with a basin seated directly next to it across from the basin was the small toilet which was once a pearl white sadly it is now a rusty brown colour.

The walls that enclosed the room were once a sandy colour with blue waves flowing through the middle of the wall, it used to be so peaceful but now it is covered in black squiggles that Daniel had drew as a younger child.

Looking down at my feet I notice how dirty the floor is, how dirty I am and it made me choke on my tears, the hot salty tears that are running down my cheeks fall into the palm of my hands and I then rub my hand lightly over my knee being gentle of my frail and weak body.

‘Oi Anderson, are you okay in there?’ I jumped at the sound of Barry’s harsh voice he was standing close to the door I could see the shadows of his feet. ‘Anderson!’ A small forced squeak escaped my lips as he pounded his fist on the bathroom door causing it to echo loudly into the small bathroom, forcing my lips open I tried to push the words out of my mouth but nothing came, I was weak.

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Character; The Multi Billionaire.

Name; Sean Thomas Lawson.

One line summary of characters storyline;

Desiring to spend the rest of his life alone it comes as a shock when he suddenly demands a young boy be abducted, training the boy to take over his company if he might suddenly pass.

Motivation;

Wants to have someone in place to run his company should he suddenly die, someone who will understand how hard he has worked.

Goal;

To raise the boy for the sole interest of the company.

Conflict;

Internally - The love he starts to feel towards the boy.

Externally - The company as it must come first.

What he will learn and how will he change;

Emotionally - He will learn how to love, how to trust and be a kinder human being.

Mentally - He will learn that it is possible to have a family and maintain a company.

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