Luna Lovegood

-cont- and I quickly scoffed as a cover before incoherently mumbling about how pathetic Potter was acting. A smirk was forced onto my face, yet it didn’t fit, and it almost strained my lips.

The *'s are used to show the words I italicized. Also, this isn't the completed chapter, but I want to get a general feel of what people think.

I've written several fanfics, and I really wish to have someone review them. A lot of the time people love to favorite or subscribe, but don't bother leaving a review. I want to know your honest opinion of the writing, and please feel free to tell me anything you don't like. You can comment on the actual website or here (I don't have a preference).

They're Harry Potter fanfics, and all but one is a slash (yaoi, whatever term you prefer). Please, just don't send flames saying that what I'm doing is "sick and against God" or such things. I do what I do, and if you don't like it, you're just wasting your time and energy telling me I'm a pervert. :) That said...

http://www.fanfiction.net/u/2030497/Luna-is-Loony <--This is my account.