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  • Will you please tell me what you think of this poem (c/c)?

    End Times

    by Rob Jackman (pen name)

    copyright 11/22/11

    Time is going too fast;

    can the precious things last?

    My children are so dear;

    the world they face, I fear.

    Everyday new weather

    Bible is the augur.

    Salvation in the blood

    redemption from the flood

    of the evil Satan

    who couldn't stop Canaan

    from God's chosen people

    freed by Him; chose idols.

    Crucified Lord Jesus;

    scattered by sin's ruthless

    grip on humanity,

    backs turned from God's beauty.

    God’s Word spread to gentiles

    across desert and isles.

    Through centuries it was taught,

    always wars were fought.

    God is perfect, it’s true!

    We are here. The breakthrough

    when tested faith is ours

    and love has many scars.

    Today I thank the Lord.

    Let’s stand in one accord:

    His gifts are bountiful!

    Don’t be Cane, be Abel.

    I was inspired by Warren's question:

    http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201111...

    and do not consider myself to be a poet. Forgive all the errors, but I would love to have them pointed out in a c/c.

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