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Rob
Will you please tell me what you think of this poem (c/c)?
End Times
by Rob Jackman (pen name)
copyright 11/22/11
Time is going too fast;
can the precious things last?
My children are so dear;
the world they face, I fear.
Everyday new weather
Bible is the augur.
Salvation in the blood
redemption from the flood
of the evil Satan
who couldn't stop Canaan
from God's chosen people
freed by Him; chose idols.
Crucified Lord Jesus;
scattered by sin's ruthless
grip on humanity,
backs turned from God's beauty.
God’s Word spread to gentiles
across desert and isles.
Through centuries it was taught,
always wars were fought.
God is perfect, it’s true!
We are here. The breakthrough
when tested faith is ours
and love has many scars.
Today I thank the Lord.
Let’s stand in one accord:
His gifts are bountiful!
Don’t be Cane, be Abel.
I was inspired by Warren's question:
http://answers.yahoo.com/question/index?qid=201111...
and do not consider myself to be a poet. Forgive all the errors, but I would love to have them pointed out in a c/c.
11 AnswersPoetry10 years ago