Lindsey B

So recently I went to pay for something in a store with my debit card. I wasn t sure if I had enough in my account to cover it but I don t have an overdraft so I thought the worst that could happen would be it would decline my card. It didn t so I thought it was fine. I checked my balance the next day and I d overdrawn. How is this possible? I put more money into the account and it went back to positive. My bank hasn t contacted me at all about it. Is there anything I need to do now or do I just ignore it?

Okay, so there's a song I heard ages ago. In the chorus he quotes lyrics from a song by i think the ronettes but I can't remember the name of either of them or any lyrics. If I remember right, the intro sounds very similar to the intro of Message in a Bottle by Sting/The Police.

Sorry I don't remember more but hopefully someone recognises it. Thanks

It's a country song and the only lyrics I remember are: 'Oh I, I could never follow' before the chorus. It's an all girl band that sing it.

Anyone know it?

I can't really remember the lyrics or tune but I know in the video the guy singing the song was standing on a cliff and his wife/ girlfriend was running along a beach and then they were both on the beach. He was singing about his love for her. I think I remember there being a key change on the last chorus but I'm not completely sure. I used to listen to it all the time when I was little and now I can't find it anywhere. It's fairly old. Anyone recognise it?

What's the best Channing Tatum movie in your opinion?

I'd just like some feedback on some lyrics that I recently wrote. Please don't be mean :)

Verse:

Tell me do you ever feel like going your own

way?

and tell me are you ever scared

of forgetting it all if you go?

yeah

Pre-chorus:

I just wanna escape,

but I don't know how to leave.

Don't want to let go.

Chorus:

I need to move on with my life

and leave the past behind,

but I don't ever wanna forget

who I am and how I got here.

I don't want that to disappear.

I know that I can't stay here forever.

So I'll just remember,

Yeah I have to remember.

Verse 2:

Tell me do you ever feel like running away?

and tell you me have you ever heard the words

get ready, get set, stay?

Pre-chorus:

I don't know how to leave

cause I don't want to let go,

but I need to escape.

Chorus

Verse 2 as bridge

Chorus.

Thanks! :)

I was wanting a little advice on my lyrics. I wrote them for a GCSE music composition which they are good enough for, but I was wondering if they are good enough to become a famous song? The song's called Beautiful Liar....no it's not a Beyoncé and Shakira copy...(Think Paramore mixed with Evanescence). Here it is! No hate please.

Opening:

Beautiful liar,

hidden beneath the mask I know so well.

Turns out that the one I knew

only exists in our heads.

Verse:

You must be mistaken

if you think I can't see right through you.

I know that you're broken

but you won't let no one see the truth.

You've given up.

You don't know what you've gotta do.

I couldn't see before,

but now I know what you've been through.

Pre-Chorus:

Secrets and lies,

flashing through your eyes

to camouflage the horrors of your past.

You can't be led

to the light ahead.

You've gotta find your own way back.

Chorus:

Beautiful liar,

hidden beneath the mask I know so well.

Turns out that the one I knew

only exists in our heads.

Invisible shadow,

always in the dark,

one move from falling apart.

The light has found you.

Now it's time for you to reveal the truth.

Show the world the face

behind the beautiful liar.

Verse:

Can't say I blame you

for never showing the side of you that was weak.

But you've been strong for too long.

Lost your balance, now you need to find your feet.

Repeat Chorus

Bridge:

You can't believe that it could've happened

any other way.

You've got a second chance

and you know you can't

just throw it all away.

Changed Chorus:

Beautiful liar.

You hid beneath a mask I knew so well.

Turned out that the one I knew

only existed in our heads.

The light found you.

Finally you revealed the truth.

You showed the world the face,

showed the world the face...

You've shown the world your face.

Goodbye, beautiful liar.