madinalake

ok so heres a bit of my writing let me know what you guys think...

"valerie" an unrecognizable voice sings out softly, but almost as if its taunting me.

"Help me val" it cries again.

alarm and panic should have filled up every inch of my soul but for some strange reason my initial reaction was far fom that of fear.

I open my eyes to discover that the field i had been lying in had disappeared, and had been replaced by a small room with a hole in the grey stone that had bars covered over it like a prison cell, from the 1800's. Two fire lit torches hung on either side of the old wooden plated door, which was open slightly showing only the darkness that beckons to me.

'where am i? this isnt the field' i frown in confusion with my thoughts as i slowly step towards the door, fighting against every muscle in my body with ease as it screams in the face of danger. Warning me not to do this. Yet my head and my aching heart process nothing but curiosity. So many questions, with exploring will i only discover the answers.

Please let me know what you guys think thank you

ok im having a little trouble i lightly shake the microphones for 5 mins and nothing is happening. does anyone know how to do it? and how long it takes?

because of the leak stephenie may never finish it. im devastated and annoyed and noooooo this cant be happening.

well i finished reading it a while ago and i absolutely loved it. anyone else have some opinions

why does my mum always say shes fat or does her bum look big in this i will never understand, can anyone explain why?

my friend is becoming depressed because of her boyfriend he doesnt seem to love her but she loves him and he just uses her and treats her like dirt i really hate to see her like this please help me i dont know what to do to make her realise that shes awesome and that she is worth more than what she feels shes worth?

well he smiles at me and there has been eye contact but i just dont know whether he likes me. weve never spoken to each other and he seems really shy just like me, how do i know if hes just being friendly by smiling at me or if he likes me?