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Hello I am an aspiring Author and I would like help in making my writing sound a little more professional.

I'd like to improve on my:

- characters- they just don't seem believable, people say when you write stories that your characters come alive and that they tell you what they want. I don't think I've ever felt that when I write.

- back story- I don't think I can write back stories well and to be honest, if I was to create a character that is troubled I wouldn't be able to write a fitting back story for them.

- plots- I feel that they're weak and they have nothing to them, something happens then something else happens, end. there is no twists and turns or sense of adventure for my characters.

- setting- I know I don't describe much but I feel that I can't describe well, I find I say the same things like tall modern and big. I understand all buildings aren't like that but in a city a lot of buildings do look the same.

well im looking for some really good supernatural horror books because i love them so much

recently i have read

ring and spiral by koji suzuki

pictures in the dark

room 13 by robert swindells

i enjoyed skellig by david almond but thats not really supernatural thriller or horror

i have read twilight but the saga did nothing for me im not a big romance fan.

books i will be reading soon

dark waters by koji suzuki

IT by stephen king

project 17 by Stolarz, Laurie Faria

so yeah some suggestions would be great hahaha, i really like stories where there is like ghosts and hauntings,

my skill just ran out and i dont have any pen to buy another skill please help me

right im really getting into touhou msuci and it's fanart i would love to be able to play the game but i woudnt know which one to start with. i will probally be a beginner cos im not that good at games and does each game have like a diffrent mode on i just need thing made clear basicly thanx in advance

i went to france and whilst sitting on the beach i noticed i got a bite, i only noticed because it was really ichy and sore it was also really sunburnt. it was a giant bump when i first got it and it was a giant bump for the first 5 days and it had a hole in the top but now it's scabbed over but it's been 10 days since i have came back and it hasnt went down much it just looks like a injection and the whole area around it is enflamed and really bumpy should i be worried and seek medical advice or is this something i can handle myself

i always remember my dreams, there really wierd and i remember them in such detail it's creepy. why could this be

im 16years old i sleep about 9 - 10 hours a night and im not on any medication i did have a bad time a few years ago when my mam split up from my stepdad. thats about it but that happened but it happened like 4 years ago now

when i upload a new video when i go onto my channel an old video dissapears off the end of my list of videos is this a youtube fault or a one of my own how can i fix it

ok so i dont feel well, being honest i could just collapse here

im 16 female, it's that time of the month for me but my pain is just unreal this time it's never been like this.

my head is boiling and i can see goosebumps all up my arm,

it hurts to eat, drink, go to the loo, walk and to get up from sitting.

it is just unreal

well thanx for reading hope i can get some good answers

i dont know how to word this without ounding like a **** here so here goes.

i dont want to give out names here so ok, im going out with someone named mike and i loce him so much, we've been going out for 3 month i've known him since i've been 3 and we got together and we are really close but we dont hold hands or kiss or anything the nearest we got was hugging, i am awake with this being my first boyfrine we're both shy to make a first move.

but i also like someone called bob, he is great we get along great same as mike but i know bob is more forward with things , fair enough i would still be shy to like do things but i know he would make the first move, with mike it's always me who has to make the first move.

i know bob could give me what i would like, but i am going out with mike and loved him more than bob, im so confused and about mike and bob the first names i thought of lols, please help would be appreishated

im 16 a female.

dont get the wrong idea by physical i mean like kissing and cuddling not like well you know.

i know we're both too nervous to make a move and like i dont want to scare him off either

what genre, book covers?, the blurb on the back?

also how can you make a story more emotional if the story line seems quite flat

honestly somethings i think are so twisted it's unbelievable here are a list of some things i feel

1.it would be better if i wasnt on the earth (suicide threats on multiple occasions)

2.what it would be like if i stabbed myself

3.would love to faint (i will be in a situation with someone close and i will think how nice it would be to faint and have them by my side when i wake up)

4.when i go out to town thinks everyone is talking about them, gosh i hate that so much.

5.cant sleep at all i've been suffering insomnia a lot recently this is my 3rd week of being awake

6.i am afraid around ther people who i have not meet i think there out to get me, i have 1 close friend and i can be very aggressive people find it really hard to get along with me.

7.i get stressed a lot so much i get headaches everyday and i currently suffering acute back pain havent been able to move for 2 days

8.i have really bad anger problems, i should see someone about this is threw a chair off someone the other day because he called me fat (i am really touchy about my weight though) still ... lets just say im very violent

9.i am a emotional person my parents split up when i was 1 year old i have grew up with no dad, and when friends say i hate my dad for what ever i throw fits, then mam got a boyfriend and i was happy for 11 years he was like my dad i even called him dad but he left and i fell into manic depression for 3 years and i got help for that, but if people mention thier dads i throw fits.

10.more enotional when i do something wrong even small things like i drop something i feel like crying, reason why work experience was horrible. i cry at the smallest of things.thought when i am happy i am too happy

11.i can go from being happy to really sad within 10 seconds, i have mood swings it' really horrible. i can be really happy laughing and everything then i will remember something and be really sad and breakdown.

there the main ones at the moment but well that should be enough for you to get a taster of my life

a normal day can go something like this, i get up go to school someone complains thier family i breakdown crying then build that sadness into anger and destroy everything, then i can be either sent to the toilets to clean up or i get told off, then lessons start i will get something wrong in a lesson cry again, then lunch comes i dont feel like eating because of being upset then someone will pick on me for being the way i am then i get involved in fights after school because of thme picking on me and how i am.

honestly somethings i think are so twisted it's unbelievable here are a list of some things i feel

1.it would be better if i wasnt on the earth (suicide threats on multiple occasions)

2.what it would be like if i stabbed myself

3.would love to faint (i will be in a situation with someone close and i will think how nice it would be to faint and have them by my side when i wake up)

4.when i go out to town thinks everyone is talking about them, gosh i hate that so much.

5.cant sleep at all i've been suffering insomnia a lot recently this is my 3rd week of being awake

6.i am afraid around ther people who i have not meet i think there out to get me, i have 1 close friend and i can be very aggressive people find it really hard to get along with me.

7.i get stressed a lot so much i get headaches everyday and i currently suffering acute back pain havent been able to move for 2 days

8.i have really bad anger problems, i should see someone about this is threw a chair off someone the other day because he called me fat (i am really touchy about my weight though) still ... lets just say im very violent

9.i am a emotional person my parents split up when i was 1 year old i have grew up with no dad, and when friends say i hate my dad for what ever i throw fits, then mam got a boyfriend and i was happy for 11 years he was like my dad i even called him dad but he left and i fell into manic depression for 3 years and i got help for that, but if people mention thier dads i throw fits.

10.more enotional when i do something wrong even small things like i drop something i feel like crying, reason why work experience was horrible. i cry at the smallest of things.thought when i am happy i am too happy

11.i can go from being happy to really sad within 10 seconds, i have mood swings it' really horrible. i can be really happy laughing and everything then i will remember something and be really sad and breakdown.

there the main ones at the moment but well that should be enough for you to get a taster of my life

a normal day can go something like this, i get up go to school someone complains thier family i breakdown crying then build that sadness into anger and destroy everything, then i can be either sent to the toilets to clean up or i get told off, then lessons start i will get something wrong in a lesson cry again, then lunch comes i dont feel like eating because of being upset then someone will pick on me for being the way i am then i get involved in fights after school because of thme picking on me and how i am.

i have this lad i really like i have known him since i have been 4 years old and we have been talking a lot recently and i have really falllen for him i am the only female friend he has he isnt popular in school (dunno why he's ace) but anyway i asked him to the school dance on my birthday and he said yes but maybe he only said it because he didnt want to hurt my feelings cos i know he's like that, but i really want to let him know how i feel

i only get to talk to him in this one lesson spanish so we really cant talk to too much and on a monday i walk out of school with him

i am having a party and i ave people coming who like rock and epople who likes charts i am in charge of the playlist and i would like to know what rock music that everyone will be happy with.

many thanx in advance dani

me and my friend have been watching parodies all day and we have decided we would like to make a youtube series, and we have no ideas

you will be credited if we use your idea and u willl have the best awncer

things we would do is like voice overs and creating our own characters. we just dont know what to do.

am 15 almost 16

i write stories about lesbian couples and my two best friends are best friends

i did fancy two lads (not at once) but they rejected me and i had an encouter with a friend (female)

ne of my best friends went though and i gay stage and she confessed her love for me on a sleepover and she fell asleep next to me (nothing happened i was 15) i stayed awake and i heard her whisper my name in her sleep and it sent waves through me. then a later time i fell asleep during one of my classes and when she woke me up her touch felt really good to me i think of her in my sleep and i fantasise about her sometimes. then she came out of the am i gay stage but i still thought about it

the fact i fancied boys before this makes me think i'm not but cos i had this encounter with this girl makes me think i am and i'm so confused

am 15 almost 16

i write fanfics about lesbian couples and my two best friends are best friends

i did fancy two lads (not at once) but they rejected me and i had an encouter with a friend (female)

ne of my best friends went though and i gay stage and she confessed her love for me on a sleepover and she fell asleep next to me (nothing happened i was 15) i stayed awake and i heard her whisper my name in her sleep and it sent waves through me. then a later time i fell asleep during one of my classes and when she woke me up her touch felt really good to me i think of her in my sleep and i fantasise about her sometimes. then she came out of the am i gay stage but i still thought about it

the fact i fancied boys before this makes me think i'm not but cos i had this encounter with this girl makes me think i am and i'm so confused

i am 15 almost 16

i write fanfics about lesbian couples and my two best friends are best friends

i did fancy two lads (not at once) but they rejected me and i had an encouter with a friend (female)

ne of my best friends went though and i gay stage and she confessed her love for me on a sleepover and she fell asleep next to me (nothing happened i was 15) i stayed awake and i heard her whisper my name in her sleep and it sent waves through me. then a later time i fell asleep during one of my classes and when she woke me up her touch felt really good to me i think of her in my sleep and i fantasise about her sometimes. then she came out of the am i gay stage but i still thought about it

the fact i fancied boys before this makes me think i'm not but cos i had this encounter with this girl makes me think i am and i'm so confused

can i download wii games to a sd card

if not how can i get wii games onto disk if i download them and what kind of disk would i use

how do i get wii tunes on the wii

thanx all in advance