Isabelle

I read so many stories with interesting concepts that are underdeveloped and full of obvious mistakes- mostly grammatical. I'm reluctant to leave comments because I don't want hate- I want people to check out my stories- and I know we aren't perfect (I'm certainly not). My question is what is okay to comment? I feel like everyone that comments sticks to positive things, ignoring the negative. I also don't want to come across as the "cocky, arrogant, ignorant" teenager, although it sometimes pains me physically to read stories on Wattpad.

I'm dogsitting a four year old pug for a week, and she has horrible manners. By manners, I mean she is untrained. If there is one trait I'd like to break (which could possibly save her life) it would be the fact that she will eat every little thing on the floor. Be it paper, foil, cardboard, or even random fuzzies, she is seen licking it up with her abnormally long tongue and swallowing it. And this isn't uncommon at her own home either. She goes into their bathrooms to get toilet paper and she climbs on the tables to steal food. How can I break the habit of not eating everything in little under a week?

I don't really understand Artificial Intelligence thing. Can anyone explain in simple terms?(:

Whenever we go outside I try throwing him the tennis ball, and sometime he half-heartily chases after it, but then he never retrieves it. Yes, I'm aware that I could train him to get the ball, but what's the point if he doesn't naturally want to get it? Something else that's a little different is he will, however, fetch empty water bottles. I have a 2 year old male Boxer, by the way. I just want to know why he won't go after a ball but he'll go after empty water bottles.