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  • What do you think of my poem, In the corner of a deserted chamber?

    He sat there

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with cobwebs, and ants crawling somewhere

    with distress, and words he could barely hear

    He was gloomy

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with a pang of guilt, and an inscrutable straight face

    with misery, and with a reminiscence of the tragedy

    He was betrayed

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with silhouettes, of love and acts of copulation

    with her, whom he adores and loves and glorifies

    He took away her life

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with a blunt knife, corroded and rustic

    with her blood, and gore of acrid smell

    He lost her

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with tears, flooded from his heart as blood

    with grief, and outpouring remorse

    He wanted her back

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with high regards, of loving her once more

    with deep love, no man can fathom

    Now, he’s alone

    in the corner of a deserted chamber

    with walls, of bricks and planks of wood

    with cloistered way of life & of death.

    3 AnswersPoetry1 decade ago